I love the story so far and I think you should continue writing it. It is very good. I like all your fics though. Your a really good writer.

OMG, what a great story! Please, write more! *AmberWings*

That was just so ... wow!

Absolutely stunning and very beautiful visual images, especially in the last but one paragraph and the last words "That was all he needed." - they fit very well.

And I think you made the image of the relationship between those to characters very real - Akane states in your story that she "trusts Ranma". That describes their relationship in a simple way and that was the major underlying tone of the Manga as well.

I hope you write a second chapter and I hope we can read future stories from you.

Yours,

sincerely,

FluX

It's soo KAWAII!

I love it!

Please continue soon! I can't wait! -

I found it great, but you mostly focused on Ranma's thoughts, I think it could be great if you make it more equal, but that's all up to you! . The rights of an author...

heh, she trusts him? to bad he don't trust him... The next moring should be fun, they will be close looking for wormth, it always happens.

That and the fact that she attacks in her sleep and he dodges or blocks... that could have some intersting body placement...

Very well crafted. You have a talent for capturing emotions within words.

Great first chapter! It's such an original beginning and everything is described with such skill. Great work! I can't wait to read more! _

You were asking if we like it? Gosh, we LOVE it!

Well, at least I do. It really is powerful and absolutely not too WAFFy. I mean, if you want it to be powerful you're supposed to make it waffy.

I can't wait to read the next chapters, after all there's that kiss awaiting somewhere in the future (remember, you promised). So, there's no way you can cut off this fic at a place like this, ne? Please continue, please, please...

IT'S SO CUTEEEEEEE a loved it :)

writ more plss

Love what you've done... I can't wait to read what happens next!

Hmmm...nice WAFF so far. But Akane and Ranma seem a bit of OOC...not one "Ranma No Baka!" nor "Uncute Tomboy" to be heard anywhere...and letting Ranma "Hentai" Saotome sleep in the same bed as him, on the first night even? Also, if this was their parents idea I think they would raise a little more fuss over this "vacation" I am not saying this is not a well written piece, it is. Nice writing style, good descriptions and internal dialouges all the way around, I just don't feel as much of the conflict that is usually involed in Ranma's and Akane's relationship.

This is of course just a IMHO...It has been well written and has been a fun read. No slight on the author is meant here, just some personal observations.