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princesstutulovver
2008-08-05
ch 32,
abuseomg i cant believe its the end
i love this story
i dont get why chibi-usa fell in love with hotaru i mean doesnt she get with helios
but i still love this story:)
princesstutulovver
2008-08-03
ch 22,
abuseOMG!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER:):)
princesaangelbebe
2008-06-11
ch 32,
abuseI liked the story, specially the ending it was soo corny but so cute at the same time! AlthoughI do wanna knwo when Harry finally knew that chibi-usa was his daughter..
AnimeHanyou39
2008-02-16
ch 32,
abuseJust wanted to say, with all the bumps and 'huhs?', this was very good! Just thought I'd give you my 1 cents. :B
LittleGirlCoch
2008-02-06
ch 32,
abusei loved this story! it was intense and a brilliant read.

one question:
what are the names and singers of the songs in this fic?

i really want to know how the tunes go. i love the words and just curious about how the go with the music
Sailor Wolf4
2007-11-28
ch 32,
abuseGreat story and Well writen.
Megan Consoer
2007-10-27
ch 32,
abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Taeniaea
2007-10-04
ch 32,
abuseGreat Story!!
SerenityMoonlight
2007-07-16
ch 32,
abuseThis is a great story! I luv it! I CAN'T WAIT FOR Rules of the Game it sounds like a good story and plus it has Harry nd Usagi together!
Azure-x-Rose
2007-05-26
ch 16,
abuseChapter 16 because Mina and Serena are my favourite characters too. In my stories i either put them as cousins or Venus & Moon twins. And i don't really like the whole lesbian senshi idea. (NO OFFENSE TO LESBIAN STORIES AND URANUS/NEPTUNE!) I make exceptions with Haruka and Michiru.
sailorphoenix
2007-04-30
ch 32, anon.
abuseI finished it! I was going to wait until tomorrow and read the rest butit just wouldn't let me go. even though I would have liked for there to have been more interaction between harry and vodemort it was acceptable. I really liked the fact that they got married at the end. I hope you read this because I wanted to know if your sm/xmen fic stars above is complete? i'm on the internet with a pda and it won't let me search for fics by name. if it's not complete are you working on it? if so about how many words is it? that will help me narrow down what little searching I can do. please e-mail me and let know. thanks.
sailorphoenix19
2007-04-29
ch 13, anon.
abusethis is a very good story. it has just the right amounts of action, romance and filler scenes. good job.
pinkpantherprankster
2007-02-26
ch 20,
abuseNo. No. No.
Im tellin ya the pyro shoulda been in Gryffindor.
She's brave and stubborn.
Not to mention her colors.
himeko sorano
2006-11-13
ch 32, anon.
abuseIt was good. I had a real problem that you didn't do what you said you would from one chapter to the next. For example, in the chapter where Lily and James were brought back, you said that Serena had no idea what she had done and how she'd impact the future. Then, in the next chapter, you completely ignored the fact that Harry's parents came back from the DEAD! That would have affected him in a major way and you completely ignored it and their supposed "impact on the future".

I absolutely hated the Silver Millenium names, they were so corny and really, what was wrong with their regular names? Hermione turned into Harmonious, Rei turned into Reichel? If you were trying to make them sound more royal, they just ended up silly.

You said that Harry would finally have a younger sibling. He already has one, Crystal, or whatever. They may be twins, but twins don't come out at once, one's older than the other.

There were lots of grammar & spelling problems, but I get that you didn't have spell-check. Ultimately, this was a good fic, but not a great one. 2.5 out of 5 stars.
SasuSaku Fan No.1
2006-08-24
ch 32,
abusePLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL I LOVE IT ITS AWSOME!
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