um, god, ever heard of formatting? i can't even tell if the fic is good or not 'cuz the formatting is absolutely horrible, completely unreadable!

Actually really good.

This needs more publicity however.

This is very interesting. Any chance of an update? I've written a Ranma-gets-split story of my own called Ranko half Dreamgirl. Reading stories like yours has inspired me.

Great story, update soon!

Good story. Would like to read more. Please update soon. I'm quite fond of Seperation stories like this.

It's one of those rare stories you pick up and almost immediately it whizzes you through dozens of flickering emotions. From the fast paced action packed adventure, humourous slapstick, mystery and brain twisting plots, to the poignant unique character portrayal. It's still the good ole Akane who can't cook to save her skin, it's still the typical chauvinistic otoko-Ranma, even to the ever-rife domestic mess of the Saotomes; but at the same time it's a gift of the writer to surface out a different side of the characters. This story is about revelation, change and progression. It is a cure not just for physical constraints, rather it is a symbolic cure of the mistaken identity, lost parentage, imperfections and discovery of self potential. Often at times progressing means taking a step back in time to ponder and analyse, as we see in Onna-Ranma's dillema.

would you read me this story again before i go to bed? it's much more livelier in your voice than in mine. keep writing.....(oh pretty lights)

I believe that Mew and Mica are from Easy Fighter Hyperdolls. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Well I must say, I don't think I've quite ever seen THAT happen when Ranma is split. Though it's almost like a combo of different things that have happened. At first it seemed like it would be similar to the one where Ranma is of one mind , two bodies, but I like how they sort of snapped out of responding at the same time in the same way gradually.

I hope you know where you're going with this, because it could really go in many different directions. As long as you keep the Ranma 'feel', this should be a good story, cliched or not.

An old idea, but fairly well written. You can still have originality later. One thing that irked me was your use of "oneechan" Oneechan means OLDER sister. Nabiki and Kasumi would not use oneechan to refer to Akane, they would say "imotochan". Just letting you know. This fic still could have potential. I hope you aren't going to have Ranma, Akane, and Ranma just go back to Nerima without anything else happening though.

Well, not badly written, but you do realise that splitting Ranma into male and female halves is about the most cliche way of 'curing' the curse there is out there. I saw the synopsis, saw the word 'cure' and knew exactly what would happen. It's been done over and over again. It's usually an excuse to introduce an Annoying New Character (onna-Ranma), who is allowed to be the star of the story because she IS Ranma, oh yes indeedy.

Would be nice to see some more original way of 'curing' Ranma in a way that he would not have liked. Ah well.

well that was unexpected. but cool all the same. i like how the 'cure' turned out. most amusing. thank you for sharing and i look forward to seeing the next chapter.