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Hunt's Honey
2009-09-20 . chapter 12
Please, please, PLEASE finish this fic! I would LOVE to see how it ends.

The story has been written really well and I'm itching to find out what will happen to Harry and little Sevvie.

Lis x
mummacass
2009-09-15 . chapter 12
this story is great! You simply have to finish it!


Cass
(in australia)
Venuspixie
2009-09-08 . chapter 12
This is very funny, please update soon.
xXxSkittlerzXxX
2009-08-22 . chapter 3
LOL! 'he didn't die did he?'!

Gotta lurv Neville, tho. Gotta lurve him...
IchigoRenji
2009-08-15 . chapter 12
hahaha, I love this story, especially your Toddler Babble section, its so freaking cute!
TsukiyoTenshi
2009-08-06 . chapter 11
DAMNIT TO HELL! I forgot to put this in the review I sent for the 12th chap.
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Is this story of yours, by any chance, loosely related to the movie, "Three Men and a Little Baby" only Harry Potter style?
TsukiyoTenshi
2009-08-06 . chapter 12
HAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! THIS IS JUST TOO FUNNY! SEVERUS TOBIAS SNAPE BEING REDUCED TO A PINT-SIZED MIDGET OF A CHILD! ALL OF THIS SITUATUINS WITH BOTH TODDLER AND BABY SEVERUS WERE HILARIOUS! WHO KNEW A CHILD OF HIS CALIBER HAD SUCH A UM "BIG" MOUTH!! When I read the part with Voldermort trying to play with Severus, I was getting a little scared! Just like you wrote, "'didn't fit in with the 'world dominating evil''" AND I DEFINATELY AGREE WITH THAT!! I just hope Severus and Harry get out of Voldermort's clutches unharmed . . . I just hope that Hermione and the others get to Harry and Severus before anything bad happens to either of them. I can probably tell that you might've been laughing while writing the whole thing! I definately would've! I LOVE THIS!!

PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE--WAIT, I HAVE TO READ MOE, so I'd be much obliged if you'd update ASAP!! ;)
deeps85
2009-08-06 . chapter 12
tht was grt. i read it in one go thoh i did read few chapters again.
vgriffin4
2009-08-05 . chapter 8
Pushunz! this is just way to funny Mrs. Norris with no tail you good very good update soon I LOVE THIS STORY Vicky
Zarilia
2009-08-01 . chapter 12
This is great! Will you please please please update again?
trollen
2009-07-12 . chapter 12
a very good story, hope everything goes right, at that it dosen't take em to long to get severus back to his own self. hope to read more.
aiko
2009-07-10 . chapter 12
you have got to update! this is one of the best, and funniest stories ive ever read! the best i tell ya!! please please please update!! youve got to!!
DiscountedPoet
2009-07-07 . chapter 12
This is the perfect mix of humor and drama, kudos for finding a good balance. I also appreciate the dry sarcasm and dark humor, both in Severus' demeanor and your own narrative voice. Not many can pull it off. I was so happy when i started reading this, i nearly fell off my chair laughing, but then i saw it wasn't finished, nor had it been updated in a while. And that made me very, very sad.
Please finish it, even if it's only one more chapter. I'm invested in this new, kind and witty potions master.
Besides the fact i give great reviews, I'm uber adorable. So you should do what i want.

P.S. One thing i noticed plot wise, was that while you did offer plausible explanations for character intentions/ plot elements, they did not seem very thoroughly studied, and occasionally a little implausible. Also, peoples' intentions were often conveyed through dialouge only. This is obviously a perfectly acceptable plot device, but try branching out.
Drishti Choudhury
2009-06-18 . chapter 12
This story's absolutely hilarious. I love "Sevvy's" Baby Babble. I can't wait to read the next chapter! *hint hint*
baby snape admirer
2009-06-09 . chapter 12
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish your story...it's really good and you dropped it at the hiatus! sigh.
signed:
big admirer of the plot ;-D
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