hey!! wow... u hve sum talent with writing... i nearli cried wen kel wz thinkin bout cleon... but PLZ... COULD U PLZ??! make her go with cleon..! cleon is so kwl! plz!? =D

newayz. u r so good
cyz
darkangel

Wow, I really liked this so far. Your imagery with the sights and sounds is very vivid. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (also, I'd just like to say how perfect it is that Raoul and Buri eloped. while I'm still an avid Gary/Raoul fan, if Raoul and Buri were to get married, they'd elope *G*)

Also, thank you for your feedback on "Roots". I'm really glad that you liked it! The tree imagery was hitting me all through my reading of Briar's Book, so I'm happy that you liked that element of the fic. Thanks again!

Keep on writing. Its really good!

Wonderful only problem is its kind of a cliffhanger. Keep writing dont leave us hanging.

this is really good so far, but it's hard to tell right now, keep working on it!

This is really good!

Wow this is already a fabulous fic your a great writer might I add and you better start writing because I'm dying to know what's to happen next.

Poor Kel. Oh well. DIE CLEON! *cough* No offense if you don't like him or anything. I just-don't. Oh well. Is she gonna get with Dom or something? Or Neal? ANyone but Cleon. I hate Yuki. Well, I really don't, but I wanted Kel to get with Neal! Gr... Damn Yuki. Damn Cleon. OH well. Write more please!

*~Cami~*

Wow! Very good...isn't Neal sweet when he gets all protective of Kel? Aww! Keep writing, I'd like to see what happens next. Hm, wonder who Kel will be marrying?

Ooooooooooooo prettiful!! i like it!!!