Good story babs, fif shirly and gogo dodo are some of my favioite charcters in tiny toons so it was nice yo used babs and gogo

Nice chapter. Good use of Babs' personality.

Keep the good writing.

Let me get my only complaint out of the way: New speaker=New Paragraph- don't worry, if people(read-teachers) didn't constantly get on me for that rule, and html formatting didn't like automatically do that for me I would have a hard time w/ that too.
Now for my highest compliment: I can hear Tress MacNeille and Charlie Alder (voices of Babs and Buster respectivly..yeah, I know, I am a total dork) and the rest, especially at that one point, the whole "Barbara Ann Bunny" and "BUSTER, I TOLD YOU NEVER TO CALL ME THAT!" bit, I could here that Tress/Babs quirky scream ::shudders at realistic sound of the scream::
^_^

I have trouble remembering that rule too. But that's okay, a lot of people write like that. The readers just have to pay more attention. :)

I really enjoyed that story. Write more soon.

Okay, first off.. good story~I liked it
but just so you know, when you have dialogue in a story: Every time you switch characters you need to make a new paragraph.. Otherwise it's harder to tell who's REALLY saying what.