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Aceina 11/16/09 . chapter 8
verry good fic i didtn expect to enjoy it but it was verry enjoyable i liked it it alot i woudl like more of this kinda thing perhaps the sailor mon chars as samuria and ninja that would be cool o and I WANT USAGAI X REI

so says i THE NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL OF THE WORLD *strikes a dramatic pose*
Teresa Kaiju 11/10/09 . chapter 8
Fun little story. I particularly liked Usagi doing comedy! How appropriate. And yes, I would be interested in Shizuru and Natsuki in the old west...
Ouji-sama 4/3/06 . chapter 7
Totally. I think you should write the prolague story! _
suisei no mitsukai 5/18/04 . chapter 7
I just love your alternate universe stories. You've got some great ideas and you work them well. This story is so different from most and that's part of what makes it great. I think that you should either continue this western or write another one. It makes a great story :D Keep up the good work.
CerberusOfThe5 3/17/04 . chapter 7
Me likie!
Inu Yokai 6/15/03 . chapter 7
Very good, this urban cowboy approves greatly...
Zara the Pirate 1/15/03 . chapter 7
Loved it! Absolutely loved it!
Violet-chan 1/10/03 . chapter 7
*applause* I love it!

And I'm seconding the proposal to George Lucas it! A prequel and a sequel would rock! ;
Whiro 1/6/03 . chapter 7
SEQUEL, SEQUEL! Encore Encore! I liked this one alot, keep it up, I want more! Hey what about George Lucasing it? Prequel and Sequel it! Bravo!

Whiro
JadesRose 1/6/03 . chapter 7
Nothin' like a challenge to bring out the best in you. You did a great job, although I thought pairing absolutely everybody together was bit much. Still, it was a great story ... I hope you write more sometime.

Good Job!
Proz-milo 12/27/02 . chapter 6
I really like the story, keep more of the chapters coming!
makoto-18 12/19/02 . chapter 6
bully all to hell! why did you leave it off right there? well i hope you update soon!
JadesRose 12/19/02 . chapter 6
It's very good ... But what I want to know is how do all the children that are (and aren't) named after Ami get created? You haven't mentioned any men at all (in town)... not even in passing. Is Darien going to arrive later? or is this a Darien-free story? Be interesting to see how things would work out if he did ... I have afew ideas myself. ('Course, I always have ideas ... one of these I'll actually write my own story.)

Looking forward to reading more ... I'm really, really enjoying it.
JadesRose 12/19/02 . chapter 2
Michiru isn't blonde (just before she kisses Haruka) - that's the only error that I feel is really worth pointing out ...

This is a fantastic story! Very original and so far it's very well written! I look forward to reading the rest! (Make sure you carefully proof read. ;) It's the only thing that can only make it better!)
Rei Firestar 12/2/02 . chapter 5
Yay, an update! *does happy dance* This is a great fic! I hope to see more soon!
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