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| sadi 2007-02-22 ch 11, anon. | abuseYour story is very very good! It's been a pleasure reading it. Will is a great OC , she totally deserves Alec.His characterization is dead on by the way , one of the reasons , i like this fic so much : this is our Alec(only one tiny complent : events are too close in time but everything else , plot , emotions , dialogues etc is excellent). Thank you for writing this ! Bye. |
| OneBadCat 2007-01-18 ch 11, | abuseI loved this story - really well written. Original plot and convincing characters. And I really like that you made "an" end even if it wasn't the inteded one - cos there is nothing worse than abandoned stories with no closure!! Thanks and please write again :) |
| Dalakh 2006-12-13 ch 11, | abuselove it love it love it! |
| StealerOfDreams 2006-09-15 ch 11, | abuse*Awed Expression* Wow, that was amazing. I really enjoyed that, And its going on my favourites! Thankyou! Hannah |
| x-xDodgerx-x 2006-03-25 ch 11, | abuseHey loved your story. I could of died when you cut Wil out but thank god she's back! I think Alec is truly amazine and we all love him to bits. Your a great writer! luv bunni x x x |
| calistra 2005-07-20 ch 11, | abuseJust picked up your story, looking for something to help mine. Read all chapters in one go, so one review for all 11 chapters. I really enjoyed the way you took the story, lots of twists. My story started with Alec as main character as well. |
| Gamegirl452 2003-09-06 ch 11, | abuseGreat story, the ending was just at the right time, you could have probalby had this story go on forever, a chapter abouut the familiars and their numbers (alec could have killed them) could have been there but apart from that it was a really good sotry. I love the bit at the end where alec sings, have you ever heard jensen ackles sing, he's good. He has a really deep singing voice. It nice. Well done on the story.] Luv Ya GG452 |
| alecsgrl 2003-01-10 ch 10, | abuseWow! Great story, cant wait for the next chapter with this cute couple. I dont think the ugly thing was lame, it was real, we all say stuff we dont mean but know will sting when were mad. Plus this creates a conflict! Top notch writing! Best of luck with all you writing! |
| alecsgrl 2002-12-15 ch 5, | abuseWOW!! Really good so far, only part I didnt like was Alec trying to beat up Wil (however unsuccesful). I havent gotten to read more of this Ive been so busy. I will review agian when I finsih it all. |
| Whisper 2002-11-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseThe story? Good and beautiful! Love your writing and you should definately continue! I like the quote: "Oh right we don't talk about that. We don't talk about Alec's past." Excellent and emotional writing! |
| Auroris 2002-11-21 ch 9, | abuseYAY!!! I'M HAPPY NOW!!! YOU'VE BROUGHT WIL BACK!!!! And don't you dare think that I'm happy she's back 'cause now Alec is gonna be all joyful now. No no...it's because I like Wil the girl herself! She's interesting, in some ways like Max and in MANY ways not like her. Keep on writing!! And I hope that you make the next chapter longer!!! Thank you very much!!!! ~Auroris, Herald of Hope~ |
| bcole 2002-11-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseHey great story, awesome ideas and action. You seem to have everyone's personalities down to the letter. I like that you brought back Wil...But, I still like Max and Alec together much better...Keep up the great writing...:):) |
| jetblack 2002-11-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseglad to know someone puts random things in author's notes and reviews like me! yay! you updated |
| Whisper 2002-11-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseYeah! WIl is back! Cute how he thought she wasn't real. And how in the world do you have another trick up your sleeve? Don't you ever run out of idea? I mean that's a good thing, but I'm jealous of your creativity! |
| tasha00 2002-11-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseHey I love this story. I will be waiting to read more! |