well, a few really sudden things. some way otta character things...but all in all it was pretty funny. being a fan of pokemon it is fun to see an anti-plot or joke to the story once iin awhile. as for myself. i never saw much in romance foir ash or misty. not even mych of a connection to any of the three in that way. brock likes older girls, ash only thinks of pokemon and he wont be thinking of girls for a few mor eyears, and misty is a control freak in my opinion, but who cantlove her, MAY WILL NEVER REPLACE HER!(ok im rambling, FUN fic!)

LOL! This was great, superb, bravo!

hehe i laughed myself sick over this :) but that may have been cuase i was full off suger...

Wah _ Know how you feel. Me a Gymshipper too _ Like the fic very much!