Maybe a bit too sugary and sweet for me to really get into. I did like the sweet stuff though, it was cute.

Wow, this story hasn't been updated in forever. It's awesome, though. Are you still continuing it?

I like this story. I hope you try to update soon so all of your readers(including me) can enjoy it!

Aw.. how cute!

Update soon.

TY! you finally gave that dumbass ghosh what he deserved... lol hes such a stupid lil stuck up guy so he deserves having his ass kicked in his own house...besides...hes easy enough to beat in the tower i beat him at lvl 2 unarmed :p

Put your lemon in or

P.S. It's a good story!

I was enjoying the story so far, but then you went to an extreme. It's the bath scene and I don't think it was pulled off too well. First off, what did Koh THINK was going to happen if he gets into the same bath with a girl? And then you say he's "virtuous"? I think it would be better if Koh didn't make the offer, then when they got home Selfi would sneak into the bath and THEN try to seduce him, and then Koh could refuse without sounding (forgive me) idiotic and hypocritical. Other than that, I like the story.

I'll be honest. I don't think I really like the idea of the story. I also don't see much explanation about the other characters. I only see character devolopment for Koh and Selfi. I think the biggest problem is pacing. The story and events seemed to be rushed. Just delve a little more into the thoughts and feelings of other characters and it'll make this story shine!

x_x aw, I don't like the Ghosh bashing. I really don't. To tell you honestly I think the story is a bit contrite, but it has plot, which is often necessary to a good story. I liked Koh being traditional *wink* I can see the change in the characters, as they are older, but methinks you're being just a *tad* harsh to Selphie's brother. XD imaging Ghosh in AA as a side story. Sorry if I sound mean *pet pets Ghosh, who tries to bite her* Keep up the good writing!

This story is great! Hear me? GREAT! Forget that other story, take this one off the back burner.

P.S.- Please don't make that as lemon as it gets...

I WANT TO BE SWOONING IN LEMON-ness.

I like it. I'm confused, but I like it. I've only ever played the gameboy version so I didn't get to experience the better half. But it was still a good game. I like the whole Selfi/Kou thing. BTW, Kou is Koh's name in the gameboy version. I just want to know, is ghosh a drunk in the playstation version, or did you make him that way?

hey this was a really great story. i loved the game and always had trouble picking my favorite girl, mostly cuz selphi's swimsuit kinda sucked compared to the other girls. neway i hope you continue the story.

for some reason, i quite like it. its quite a happy story, and makes a nice break from all of the conflict and adversity you find in most stories. keep up the good work. happiness is always a good thing.

Aw man... tell me where you put the next chapters, I want to read them, please tell us soon

You had better write more on this story, because the story so far is excellent!