oh yeah! One more thing, I really don't think Dumbledore would give them 50 points each just for going with each other to the dance. Sorry, but I think you should take that out.

er.okie, where to start?
1) Ron wouldn't kiss someone on the first date, it's just too weird.

2) Why would Maddi kiss Ron if she liked Malfoy?

3) instead of "am going to the dance" try "I'm going to the dance"

4) eek! So, does Draco like her or not? First, it says that he wanted to ask Maddi to the dance, then it said that he thought she was a weird person, but kinda cute.

I'm so confused.x_x

See... I knew it! I thought Maddi liked him. Well, I'm right, right? I'll read later. lol

I loved it! That fanfic was good. But I think Maddi likes ron, or I might be wrong. I will proceed to read! lol

That was one of the most interesting chapters ever, all though you kinda threw me off when Maddi was thinking about her death eater parents. But the whole Maddi and Ron, (wolf whistle) LOL, never knew Ron had it in him. All though my pity goes out to Malfoy and Hermione. Keep those chapters comin'!!
P.S., who did Harry go with??

Sorry, but yes, this is a flamer. I think that the plot has potential, but you have far too many run on sentences. Please, watch that. Put in a few periods. Also, try to explain things with more details. DOn't tell what's happening, show it. Anyway, keep on trying.

Wow, that, was a really good story! The dance should be very interesting. I can't wait! Please update me soon, okay.
Side note: Draco, sounding like a mother, LLLLOOOLLLL!!! That's so classic!!