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| Azamiko 2005-12-01 ch 1,  | abuseO_O...*snicker*...oh my... |
| Cimmera1 2004-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse"He looked like a happy Lucifer in a brown coat, not convinced yet that losing Heaven was a big deal." --definitely my favorite line. Good stuff! |
| HurrySundown 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI've read this story several times, and I'm still not sure which is my very favorite part. Kind of leaning toward this: "The man looked sturdy, with the walk of a gun and a laughing, knowing look about him. He sounded sure of himself, but the woman was less impressed. She moved like a gun too, but a more steady one. She wouldn’t take trouble easy, and she’d likely survive it." Awesome (awesome!) encapsulation of two remarkably complex characters, not to mention the highly entertaining stroll through Wash's psyche. Also, this is the only story I've ever read where the slashy vibe feels authentic to the canon - if not for "Out of Gas," I think it might have happened this way. Nice job. |
| Glacier-to-be 2004-01-30 ch 1, | abusehm, quite good, nice story!! hehehehe |
| Kadorienne 2003-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuse"He looked like a happy Lucifer in a brown coat, not convinced yet that losing Heaven was a big deal." Good line. Brava! :-) |
| Iwondery 2002-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa, very nice indeed. You made me smile -- thanks! I'd love to read more about your Mal. Please keep writing~ |
| Allronix 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI didn't think I'd like this fic, but I started reading and I couldn't stop laughing! I like your descriptions of Mal and Zoe, and half-wonder if you're going to make a series out of this. |
| Katya 2002-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant. Gritty and stylish. I love how you did not go crazy with redneck-talk they seem to be overdoing on the show, yet kept character voices pretty true to the orginal. It's great that Wash's inner voice isn't goofy, it's very beleivable. Why not make it a series? From this point you could go both AU or keep in canon. You have a perfect setup there. Off to check out your other work... |
| Scroll 2002-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic snippet! I love how you drew upon a few lines of dialogue and was able to construct this (entirely plausible, IMO) scenario around it. I think your characters' tones of voice are right on target, and I loved the (I don't know the stylistic term for this) sentences following the actual dialogue, (e.g., "Serious, serious."). Keep up the good work! |
| Queen of Sarab 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm intrigued... this is really well-written, too. Hope to see more soon! |
| A-random-Turkle 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. I love Firefly, and Wash happens to be my favorite character on the show, and to give him the lead in this story was a very good idea indeed. I look forward to reading more of this story! Cheers- |