|Reviews for Vegeta's Problem!|
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 7
good chapter. not cheesy at all. e-mail me when you update it
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 6
moved? i looking for a house. Good Chapter.
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 5
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 4
good chapter kind of weird
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 3
i feel so sorry for you feel better. good chapter
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 2
| Kace Gray 5/20/05 . chapter 1
Ok that was Vegeta never i repeat NEAVER calls Goku, Goku. Two so funny!
| Veshira 11/26/03 . chapter 5
Keep writing! _
| Dragonbreath1 10/2/03 . chapter 5
Intresting. This has all the elemnts of a humor fic: Trunks and Goten killing something, Goku eating bulma out of house and home, hostile mental takeovers, ect. But it seems to be more dram than anything. Not a bad one, of course. Quite good, in fact.
But of you want to SERIOUSLY boost the caliber of your stories, there's a great way(Geez, I'm begining to sound like an infomercial). Simply Let you chapters stay on your hardrive for a few dats before posting. That way, you have another whole day to edit and mend. I give this advice to all of my fans. It's wjhat makes my fic so great. A beta reader is your best freind(Sometimes, in more ways than one.). Always try to put in as many ideas as possible into your chapters.
| Chuquita 8/17/03 . chapter 3
Hee! Poor Veggie! Great fic! I'm sorry about your friend. I hope you write another chapter!
| me aka. Ari 8/16/03 . chapter 3
I'm really sorry to hear about that. My best guy friend had a friend that just commited sucide last week and he's been going through a hard time too. I know that it must be incredibly hard to deal with and I can't imagine how you feel. Again I'm sorry.
| Megan 8/16/03 . chapter 3
Please write more I am begging my heart out!
| Bura Bulma.NL 12/14/02 . chapter 2
I think Vegeta is possesed...again! o.O
| Lunar-Space 10/27/02 . chapter 1
Hey...love the stroy but the system seems to be doing what it kept doin to mine...messin up the spacing! You want me to proof it and send you a word doc thing with the spacing fixed? I'd be glad to, I get annoyed when it does it to me!
| Veshira 10/26/02 . chapter 2
Lol! Funny story! XD