Keep writing! It's getting good.

Kawai! I don't think I've read this one before. ^_^ Is there more?

what happends next? Is there even a next? There'd better be a next chapter. the story can't end like this.

I thout Luna had purple short hair... :P continue?

AWW WEDDINHG!! Oooh... I'm wonderin g wats gunna happen next! Sylphiel was being too mean...

HOLY CRACKER JACKS AND SHITAKI MUSHROOMS WAS SYPHIEL OUT OF CHARACTER!!! i mean jeez it just isn't possible for her to act like that to someone!!!

That was so funny. Luna's so scary.