it rocks the song or poem or whatever really touched me if i could write music i'd write it for that. half my exitment though was almost being caut by dad sneaking on the computer

the song was a nice touch, even you shouldn't have had her blurt out her real plans. wouldn't he have been suspicious later on?

Awesome... and very interesting, how you put Wyldon in. Somehow I can't imagine him having bad manners, but maybe he learned to be polite when he got older. I hope you add more to this!

That was so awesome!

wow! This is really good! Do I smell sequel? *crosses fingers* I love how Wyldon was in it! Too bad she didn't smack some sense into him!

i really like it its cool to see Alanna's stpry before she went to the palace

and tieing Lord Wyldon in to her story was even better i hope you add more