*giggles* the fangirls are coming, the fangirls are coming! *giggles* it's like paul revere only not! *giggles*

That was really good! It deserves so many more reviews...it's hilarious! I'm reading the sequel tomorrow, I have to go to bed now, but I'm adding this to MY FAVOURITES. And, if you don't mind, I want to put a link to it on my personal website =)

Oh yes, that's a tear jerker alright. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! I mean, that's soo sad... HAHAHAHAHA Oh yes I have tears running down my face, tears of mirth that is. ANYWHO HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Draco though! oh, it's soo SOOOOOOOO sad.... That really isn't very nice you know, making girls evil. I'M a girl, and I'M not OH FINE! SO I'M EVIL! WHATEVER! I don't bloody well care. Yes, I have a peanut gallery in my head. Well, I have to go read one of my friend's stories now, so TOODLES!

"I claimed his libido!" Haven't we all?

ROFL!! That was hysterical. Fangirls! I must have been among them somewhere. What a brilliant ending! But what happened to Wolf? Is he an evil all on his own then? Or did he tell us where to find Hogwarts? :p

I loved it!

Okay, I REALLY like your story!!! I noticed a few tiny problems but only because I know the books inside out. I love Kiyoshi, he's so cool and silent and stuff! And I love the way you've written Draco. I love the way you've made Harry a whining little git ("He threw a cake at me!") because it's the role that suits him best. I can't wait to see what comes next!

I like your writing. It's nice and clear and not too descriptive. I hate being swamped in details. Damn Wolf. What is he doing with Professor McGonagall anyway? I have an idea but I also have a somewhat dirty mind so...update soon.

That was wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sorry, had to get that out of my system. Anywho, I'm sort of relieved that there wasn't much erm... stuff... in this chapter. As you may have already guessed, I have an extremely vivid imagination. I'm currently reading a fic that is one of those "can't put the book down" situations but it also features quite a bit of slash and it's disturbing because I know the characters so well and that particular pairing just doesn't work unless you write it REALLY well (which the author did, making it impossible to stop reading.) So I force myself to ignore it and continue, but it's rather, hmm... difficult.... ANYWHO.....(I am SUCH a blab) I just wanted to say that chapter 10 is great. TOODLES!

Hello. How to put this politely? Well, here goes... HOW CAN YOU PUT IMAGES LIKE THAT IN MY HEAD!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Draco and some made up guy who sounds like the type of guy I usually end up crushing on... that reminds me of one of my more male friends... I'm giving myself even worse images now... but, all in all I'd say that your story is quite entertaining.

Intriguing. BTW Dumbledore is spelled incorrectly.

We all know Draco and others are out of character so I won't talk about that. I think the final scene was...I don't want to say sensitive, but it was more believable than if they went all the way.

You know, some of this is rather amusing. Have you ever read any books by Douglas Adams?

Rather creepy. And do I detect slight signs of concern for Kiyoshi from Draco? Ok, so not that observant of me but anyway. The title is very appropriate.

interesting but Draco's OOC and Harry's definetly OOC

Despite a few canonical errors,this kicks **.
Kiyoshi is scaaary. The image of the Sorting
Hat screaming is powerful...

Interesting start but you've a couple of canonical errors.

1) Trelawyney is a woman, not a man
2) Hermione HATES Divination. I cannot imagine that she would complain about being transferred from it.

You might want to add some page breaks or some sort of indication between sections of the story. It is a bit confusing to go from one section to another as if it's just another paragraph.