Very nice. This was a good addition to "fill in the blanks" and I hope they eventually get together. It was pretty.

wonderful! just wonderful! Theres a major shortage of H/H poetry, but theres a major major shortage of GOOD H/H poetry. Keep on writing.

thats a pretty good poem! To bad J.K. Keeps whats going to happen with those 2 so concealed! If only she were more open! H/H forever!

thats a pretty good poem! To bad J.K. Keeps whats going to happen with those 2 so concealed! If only she were more open! H/H forever!

Oh shut up Carrie! (Spazzy) This was very well written even thought I detest H/H. Very sweet and unique by making it a poem. Great job on this!

Wahoooooooo! Continue

omg! that was sooooooooo good! i LOVE it!

How adorably CUTE! I loved how it was all a poem! I absolutely loved it and it was really well written!

Spazzy

Ah, preteens in love. *grin*

Just kidding. Anyway, it was beautifully written, and I like how the poem flows (I ignored the songs, sorry _;;) and I hope you come out with more songfics like this. )

Hmmm. Interesting choruses. multiple rhyming problems scatered throughout. be more careful. besides that it is good.

Favorite lines: "Through the hourglass I saw you

In time you slipped away" - i liked this part alot! good job

Keep up the good work and R&R my poetries some time!

nice poem, cute