Oh.... short and so painfully bittersweet. I felt for both Colin and Percy in their seperate lonelinesses and pains.

Very interesting and unique. I like your characterizations. The part about Percy being Minister didn't seem very realistic- I think that if Percy was in such a demanding job he probably wouldn't be in any position to look after a disturbed Colin- but other than that it was very nice.

Good pairing, its good to see new different stuff maybe you want to write how Harry died in another fanfic just a thought, its really good please keep up the great work