 misty fan 4/3/11 . chapter 5 this story is great and all but when are ash and misty gonna have some REAL romance? and fall in love? |
 imogen 7/22/01 . chapter 12 i thought it was good but im sick and tired of reading things that r incorrect (im not a teacher and ur not in school but)sos butr it really annoying but it was really good and if u write some more id like 2 c them even if it takes me 3 days 2 read like this 1 did so cya
mige |
 kawaii 3/16/01 . chapter 12 hi! I just spent (ok, so this isn't the most exact figure... but...) around 2 hours reading your story... cover to cover (can you say cover to cover if there isn't a cover? Go figure...;) and it was great! Ok, so that's all I want to say. I won't bore you... See ya! |
 Ayaika234 3/9/01 . chapter 10I'm confused...the story line moves way too slow...never caught my attention at all...not the best fic...and im not even sure what kind of romance this is and who's paired of with who. |
 jt112 3/9/01 . chapter 12 that was not a AAMR
what was that |
 Fido Official Police Dog of FanFiction.Net 3/9/01 . chapter 11 Access okay! |
 Stephanie 3/8/01 . chapter 12 Hiya Wind and Lani!
I've read every chapter of this stiry and i think its excellent!I'm really sorry 2 tell u that i have not reviewed :( ...but this will b my review now.
I think the plot is excellent and i would really love 2 know who Lani's patner turns out 2 b!Also i like it how u've made up new characters and not just stuck with Ash, Misty and Brock!I especially liked Blizzard!
But i just wanna say that if u ever need help spelling, u can come ask me cos i could help u guys correct it!Soz...plz dont take that as an insult!
Neways hope u guys do post up some more stories...they r really good...i've read some of Winds' ones and i think there r great!
C ya Bai Bai Stephanie |
 MistressCharizard 3/7/01 . chapter 6i love your story it is sooo funny! oh yea i just wanna tell you Pikachu is a girl not a guy. anyways i love your story _ |
 jus 3/7/01 . chapter 1 i think you should redo the format...i'm getting headaches from scrolling down too much... |
 someone 3/2/01 . chapter 3 I really like it! keep writing please. JAJR rules! |
 Ryo 3/2/01 . chapter 1 *falls over* Jeez that was long... I liked it though! -_ I feel bad for the poor phone... Dont mind me... I liked it! I did! I dont say that about a lot of stories... |
 clara2000 3/1/01 . chapter 3 Not laught out lound funny but, still good what will thery do next? |
 BrocksBabe 2/22/01 . chapter 1aww! yeah... brock... eh eh... i mean... um... :D i like the jesse and james parts best! you guys write good stories! |
 BrocksBabe 12/12/00 . chapter 1hmmm... a happy ending after all must be coming up! but... but i want more Team Rocketshippyness! |
 BrocksBabe 12/12/00 . chapter 1woo woo. (only think i could think of) |