You're off to a great start. It's very well written, especially the characterizations (although Spike is a bit on the skeevy side). I look forward to reading more.

And I see you've followed the Highlander theory of villany: at least one should have a name starting with K. ;)

A strong plot, an excellent band of villains, and dead-on characterization of both the Scoobies and the Fang Gang. Very well done, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this story. Both you and HonorH have a wonderful knack for capturing the characters' reactions and lingo, which is a delight to read. You've put everyone into a situation that is believeable in the Joss-Verse and I appreciate that as well.

Thanks for posting.

wow brilliant! love the length of the last chapter! update soon please.

This is really good. I can't wait to read the rest! Please post more soon! :)

Liz

this is really good i hpoe you wrtie more soon

Very interesting start. Ethan's always fun and the telepathic baddie is going to be a tough one to defeat. Looking forward to the next part and possible Spike/Angel interaction.

Really cool! Telepathy woman is major scary!

brill fic so far! more please!

Nice start. Looking forward to seeing where you're headed with it.

really interesting start, i hope you continue with it!

Could be a good story keep writing (but why are the default chapter and chapter 1 the same)

great start, i'm hooked and want more!

Bloody brilliant, mate! This one's going in my favorites! But ditch the chick, dude. She's holding' ya down.

I love this. Extremely well written, the plot sounds interesting and you have created so much suspense in this first chapter I was figuratively on the edge of my seat.

Really looking forward to reading more.