ahh... i read the sequel! lol. good job. write more soon! -leah

So they really are back together. Harry and Hermione sure seem happy that there both back home. Write More!

HazelMist

Egon... Egon... Finally!

I have been waiting for this for what seemed like a whole year!

Maybe it has been.

But... There is one thing that I would like to point out that I am a little disappointed in.

"and one of her delicious chocolate cream pies sat on the counter"

Pumpkin? Anyone?

Maybe you're not familiar with the HMS Pumpkin Pie... How sad. Write me if you have no idea what I am talking about.

There is one thing that I really would like to comment on... I think that the entry part about what has been happening in the wiz. world greatly improved from the one that you sent me. I think that it keeps everything consise.

Great job, and I can't wait for more!

Animagus-Steph

Hmm a good start :) Can't wait for more!