 dodoria185 2007-01-16 . chapter 1 This is one of the best DBZ fan fictions I've ever read! Keep up the good work! |
 Reily96 2005-12-03 . chapter 16XD!! OMFG!! I wuv it!! |
 Lord_Sesshomaru's_bride 2005-06-11 . chapter 16 I HAVE NEVER LAUGHED SO HARD FOR A FAN-FIC!! OMG!! IT WAS AWESOME! Are you going yo write a "Miss Cold" contest? lol |
 sayain girl Gege 2004-07-22 . chapter 16 Hello again I'm back and sorry for not doing this review sooner but I have been realy busy lately. I completly forgot about this story until today...(starts crying) you see it is my 14th birthday and no one is doing anything for me, I wish I was like Frieza and every one would have to celebrate it! (calms down)... now what was I doing?... oh! thats right I still need to give you my review ok I loved this story, right now its my favorite out of the Tayla of Astoria series it was so funny, I felt bad for Frieza in parts of the story like Dodoria getting drunk... and well you know the rest, and at the end of the fic... poor Frieza with his stomic problems, anyway it was great and congradulations another one of your fics gets my gift of being a 5 out of 5 on my scale. p.s. in your fic I can't remember who but someone mentions how Cooler has yet to create an heir so I was wondering if you wright another story could you make it so that his seed is rotten if you know what I mean. thanks |
 DARK KI A.K.A. LEE 2004-03-10 . chapter 16Too funny. I really thought that the last chapter was the last one but, it's a good ending. I thought it was a gag but, then I thought it was serious and, then it turns out I was right the first time. I should trust my instinks more, huh?
koay byebye now ;) |
 gunlord 2004-03-10 . chapter 4OMG! THIS IS TOO FUNNY! I'm sorry, but I do not know if I can read any more, as it may permanently damage my sanity. You, are the funniest author I have ever read. Right now all I can say is a bunch of sentimental stuff that would take a long time and be really sappy. To get an idea, watch one of Tea's (from Yu-Gi-Oh!) friendship speeches. That should give an accurate comparision to what I want to say to you, but won't because I'm a coward in that way.
~Gunlord |
 Dark-Sephy 2004-03-10 . chapter 16Lmao! that last part was so hilarious ^_^ also how Raditz and Nappa tricked Diamonique in cleaning everything. Really great epilogue to a really great story. Just brilliant fic! Loved it! |
 Jujain 2003-12-12 . chapter 15Hey! This was GREAT so far. I kinda feel sorry for Zarbon though. PLEASE continue. R&R my stories, please. |
 Minako Aino (A.K.A. Sailor Venus) 2003-10-29 . chapter 15 AH! Vegeta Won!?! Oh well. Please go easy on Zarby Warby. Please continue writing.
Peace ^_^ \/ |
 DARK KI A.K.A. LEE 2003-08-30 . chapter 15way to reccoom! now zarbon got to do Vegeta's bidding. that is funny. he wins by default. hahahahaha. nice one. |
 Dark-Sephy 2003-08-18 . chapter 13yay, you updated. cool, funny chap ^_^ lol, Cooler's busted! in your fic, you made a good and funny character out of Frieza ^_^ i like that
ah evil cliffhanger >_<
'may you be free of writer's block for the next chapter' |
 Dark-Sephy 2003-06-17 . chapter 12lol great chapter!
go Recoome, lmao!
Omg, is Vegeta really going to kiss that .. thing o.o |
 Firage 2003-06-14 . chapter 11 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOW THATS FUNNY! MORE CHAPTERS! IT'S A AMAZING STORY! |
 Dark-Sephy 2003-06-09 . chapter 11Lmao!! really funny chapter!
great story! ^.^ i love it! |
 Dark-Sephy 2003-05-20 . chapter 10lol.. good chap ^^ poor poor Rad and Nappa...
now what could be in that box.. ARRGGHH MY EYES! I'M BLIND!) |