very very good!
the words are like paint, making a picture of Jesse and Emma that I will always treasure

*mouth gaps open* I.... WOW!!! *closes aw with hands and wipes away stray drool* I loved it! The part about Emma's parents.... that was great!!!

Are you ever going to continue this storyline? or will you write more of this type of story??
I loved it!

Sequel?

Beautiful story. I hope to see more stories by you in the future.

A very beautiful piece with some very evocative language. And the J/E friendship sensitively handled. Looking forward to more work from you, and possibly a extension of this story it has lots more potential for a longer story.

ally...ally...ally..

this and dream like...had totally converted me to j/e...plus, girlfriend..we have got to have more by you!

Wow...This is one of the most beautiful E/J pieces I've ever read...the language, the description, the glimpses of background, the plot (for lack of a better term)... I love it!

Hi !
Thanks a lot for doing and Jesse and Emma fan fiction !
Megara

I know, I already told you I liked it but I will say it again...I like it! I echo everyone's sentiments regarding the language you used, its very fluid and the descriptions are as languid as the water image you constantly used in this fic. Keep up the Emma/Jesse worshipping and you just might convert me. ;)

I adore you Ally!!
Hehehehe, I knew all our talk of shower scenes would lead to something wonderful. (ie, shirtless Jesse *saliva dripping out of the corner of my mouth*).
I liked what you did with this fic. The interaction between Jesse and Emma was well done. I can't wait for your next fic (hint hint, nudge nudge).
So now that you've done a shower scene, is it my turn? Mwahahahahahhahaah =D

Soft **. Ooh. ;) Nah, it's a gorgeous piece, Ally. And this compliment is coming from an Emma-Brennan-Eeeeeeee! person. So...Hehe. I love the language you use. Very stunning, very real. Nice work.

this was a wonderful story, perhaps a sequal?

Ally this is great, another J/E gem. Possibly a sequel? Your insights into Jesse and Emma's characters never cease to amaze me...great job once again.
Iris