Reviews for Invisible Girl

Almighty God of Paper 2005-12-31 ch 4,	abuseI like this story. It's a classic story of Terra's unrequited love for Locke. I have always loved the Locke/Terra pairing, and when I first realized that Locke was going to hook up with Celes in the end, I was sad, because I really hoped that he would hook up with Terra. But then I got over it and turned my attentions toward the Edgar/Terra pairing. Anyway, I liked this story, cuz it delt with Terra's complex emotions, and her love for Locke, and it also had a nice sex scene in the end. Yay.
Codie 2003-01-13 ch 4,	abuseit was sad in the beginning. then it became a little more warm hearted in the end. It was a great story.
The Rushing Wind 2002-10-01 ch 4,	abuseNice story! I've always liked Terra-Edgar pairings (but...who are you and what have you done with Dagger?!?! She LOVES Locke-Terra pairings!!) Just kidding. Its a nice story, write more soon!