that was really good

fabulous

I remember reading up to chapter 3 at MX Bookcase, because that was all there was. But I read the rest here. I love this fic, absolutely excellent job. I'm a Jesse and Emma fan too, there isn't enough of them together. Awesome fic.

I like this chapter! You say is the last one? NO. You have to write more. There´s no enough jesse/emma storys arround. You have to keep going!! Please

Oh, shower sex in the dark, could it get any better?

no...no it can't...

Very nice fic. I like the jesse/Brennan tension. Great job.

i love this story. i was beginining to think u wouldnt finish it. i really liked that chapter, i hope the next one comes alot sooner

the story is great so far, and the suspencse going on with jesse and brennan awesome. keep it up.

P.S.
I think emma and brennan should be together in the end, i think their bond runs alot deeper to just be friends.

i can't wait to read this story. i think this story is cool.

Hey!! Finally another chapter!! I little small!! I just hope that this is gonna be a Jesse/Emma fic!! They are so cute! Make Brennan suffer a little bit and let emma and jesse be together!! Please! Update soon!! I'm waiting!!

wow, you are one amazing writer cuz you really show strong emotions from emma, brennan and jesse... although you do leave shalimar out of a lot of scenes... but otherwise, an excellent fic, can't wait for more! (p.s. emma and jesse are the coolest couple ever!)

Hi !!
I know you are an Jesse / Emma fan but how could you be their fan when you describe a so good connexion between Emma and Brennan !!
Please post more quickly !!
Megara

hey girly girl i sure hope this is a jesse/emma fic! it better be yesserie lol they are so vute how can you not pair them up? let brennan suffer hehehe

Yay finally an update I'm so relieve ^_^ *phew*
BUT you haven't updated for about a month. Come on gurly you have me dying in suspense here and that dream scene was just cruel very cruel ^_~
Hm... wll I'm usually a huge Emma and Brennen (but your Brennen is sorta creepy o lol) shipper well know wait... I just love Emma's character. So whatever you do with her make it good lol. Keep it up and PLEASE update soon!

yes please up date soon i love this story and can't wait for you next pdate