Oh, beautiful. Beautiful beautiful beautiful. Makes me smile. Thank you so much.
Del64

Muaw...love it.

Excellent. Beautiful language and very strong emotions. Keep it up- and I hope you write more than just fanfic!

This story is awesome. I really admire your characterization. You totally got Luke, his unrequited love for Lorelai, his frustration with Jess and the general citizenry of Stars Hollow, his loneliness, and the breathlessness whenever Hurricane Lorelai strikes. I thought the dreams were a really nice point of connection. Thanks for writing this.

oh my gosh, this was great! i love how the twins names keep migrating and changing, and that they are all crazy. Luke offering to stand between Lorelai's legs with a catchers mitt was beautiful, as was telling jess he should change his name.

its difficult to tell the real from the dream in this, and i like that. it makes me feel like Luke himself isnt exactly sure anymore, or wants the dream to be real so bad that he loses track.

beautiful.

Love this story!

that story didn't reall make that much sense to me. if you could could you plz explain it to me?

stari

wow. that was simply *wicked*. so well written and powerful. and sweet. i loved it.

The fact that this story only has nine reviews just proves that there is no justice in this universe. "People with a lot of nervous tension have falling dreams," is one of the best, if not *the* best, opening lines I've seen in the fanfic I've read. And it just gets better from there.

Wow. I am downright impressed with this story. There are bits, here and there, that need some clarification. The muffin/baking parallel could do with it, and the wording of one or two sentences was (unintentionally, I'm sure) out of order, but otherwise? Gold. I've always been attracted to stories that are first person, or dig into a facet of a character's personality. This really grounded Luke and gave him a voice I think he deserves.

Also, it left me rather melancholy, and while I adore a happy ending as much as the next rabid fan chicka, there's something infinitely more satisfying about finishing a story and wishing there was more. Fan fiction is categorized by its wish-fulfillment factor. And it's downright wonderful when fanfiction makes you want to write fanfiction. ;)

I encourage you to write more Gilmore Girls fic. Lord knows I'll devour it happily.

You know, I always thought that scene on the show was funny, but I never thought of it from Luke's point of view. Very good, very introspective, little funny. In other words, it's great!

Mala, I can't believe I missed this when it was posted! Here I am scrolling back through DAYS worth of Rory/this and trory that and I'm beginning to hate the letter R so much until I notice the title "hot cross buns"...intrigued, I am, sounding like Yoda to boot, and then i see your name attatched and have a 'hot diggity dog!' moment. Serendipity? Maybe. That ole' line about finding a nugget of gold in a pile of poo rings truer than ever about now.

I *love* this story. Again you amaze me with the way you can take depth and seriousness and just weave it with humor and tenderness. If THAT basket was auctioned, I'd bid on it! The names of the twins? Brilliant, funny, and a tribute to pop-culture...much like the show that inspired this gorgeous collection of words. Virile? I'd like to think so. We can only hope Lorelai finds out for sure soon.

dude, what are you doing writing silly fanfics? you have a way with words. tied things up very nicely. good essay writing styles... with the whole falling hard sensation thing. you're too good for fanfics. go write some essays.

OMG, I was giggling like a schoolgirl I liked that so much!

Aww, I liked this! I hope Luke and Lorelai get together soon! :)