Ah, taht was really good, i hope you update soon

I love this on to read chapter 2

Wow...awesome ending. I like those descriptions, like:
"Herm, I really need to talk to you," Harry said quietly. He looked as if he were about to collapse.
and:
"Is something wrong, Harry?" Ron asked from beside me. Harry glanced at him, fear flashing through his eyes, before he turned back to me again.
I love those little additions you add. ^^ Keep up the good work.

Oh god, this is interesting. Write some more!
I really hope that they get eachother in the end!
(And so they should, in the books!)

You can't stop here! You just CAN'T!!
You've got to continue with the story!!

ss, dear ss
you have been transformed
you have been drawn to the 'deep writing'
your humor is diminishing
but hey, i like the deep.
but plz dont make it sad/deep cuz then i'll cry
and if u make it sad deep put a warning in the summary
well done on this wonderful story
i just hope jess doesn't mind
-shazza

Oooh...you have to finish this. Very, very good.

OMG! Please, please update. I'll give you a quater. Love the story and the writing is really good.

Laterz

koolies

Oh this is beautiful! Really sweet and the interlude with Ginny's daughter was appropriate and added humour.

I really enjoyed this one. Really! And I can't wait to see what you do with it!

Fabulous stuff!

Hey! that was really good! it was funny to the end when its all touching with everything he says then "i jsut hope ron dosent mind" that was cute! please hrury with the next chapter!!! please!!!!!

That was really sweet!

Thanx for the reviews! I had a problem with italics too on my other story. What programs do you have on your computer? I recommend you type your story up on Microsoft Office's Word or something, and then copy and paste it all onto a new blank web page and then upload that. Or you could use html codes e.g fdf which should come out in proper italics. I hope this helps.

What do u mean 'I hope Ron doesn't mind?"
Your story is interesting...please keep submitting!!

you should keep going. this is a really good story. im having problems with mine. i cant make my words italic...

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