As Yisou said, is it really healthy for siblings to do such things?

Apparently not, for it destroyed both of them.

_melissa

Oh, so wonderful. There are few things I appreciate more in the Saiyuki fandom than well written Kanan. Very poweful, and very, very plausible.

*sob* I want to cry. Wow! What a good introspect piece about Kanan! Great take on her POV. So sad. I like! *sniffles*

Powerful. I personally have a difficulty getting into the heads of Kannan and Gonou/Hakkai, so I must congratulate you for writing their roles well. As usual, your final sentences are those with the strongest impact.

Beautiful! It's exactly what Kanan would have thought. You should write more of this kind of fics!

OMG. i can't believe how ignorant i was to write off fanfic as pure wish fulfillment. this is the best one i've read so far. i'd kill to enter a character's head that deeply, and describe his/her psyche the way you did. *hat off to 'ya*

wow wow wow...

that was incredible... nobody has ever done a piece on kanan and you did it with so much depth and tenderness...

wow...

i am speechless

Lovely! As expected, you get into the minds of the characters you write with ease and convey them to your readers. I was actually quite happy to see a story giving some depth to Kanan. Your portrayal of her is very touching.

Sooooooooooo Saddddddddddd