Nice job, but when you used the term "disneyfied", I thought Ash wasn't gonna make it in the end, since that's what Disney does, it kills a emotionally structured character and leaves the sensitive kids crying in the end. God knows I was one of the many to do so.

...Even better than the original ending...

I don't usualy like one-shots but this one was good.

That was a very good alternate ending, from Mewtwo's acting like a regular Pokemon when he realized his power had no control over death to the brief foreshadowing of "Mewtwo Returns" to having him as well as Mew being in the clouds when Ash saw them together. The only problem I had with it was the part where you had Mewtwo refer to Ash as Professor Oak's son.

Wow, that was really good. It was very deep. I personally liked the original ending; but hey, I'm a sucker for Disney endings. It would have been interesting to see it end this way.

ooh. now this i liked. i always thought that the ending in the movie was more than a little cheezy, though the principle was sound. anyways, great job.

Thank god someone made their own ending to that movie. Much better job, perhaps YOU should be the one writing these movies, and not whoever is now P (then again, I have yet to see the second and third...)

You're right, this is how TFM should've ended!

Now, why wasn't the movie like this? Maybe you should send this to Nintendo/4Kids/whoever made that movie to see if they'd rerelease it with this ending. The only problem is that it had the same results as the movie itself. But besides that, this is awesome!

Grate jobe. I hope you write more.

They should change the movie. You thought up a better ending. Hehe... YOU WRITE SUCH GOOD STORIES!

EXCELLENT! This is what the end should have been. I was so suprised when in the movie, all the Pokemon cried but not Mew or Mewtwo, or even Misty. It would have been so much more meaningful if Mewtwo had cried, and you showed that very well. Mewtwo has always been my favorits; please do more on him.

Great alternate ending! Wonderful!

Man, this was REALLY good! Way better than the real ending! I really don't know why, in the actual movie, Misty and Brock just stood around at the side of the arena and why they weren't crying at all... your version was stacks better, and shippy too!

This is great work! It was really touching, and in my definate opinion, sould have been the ending for the movie! _