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| Kaytee33 2006-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseHey awesolme little one-shot! I'm glad you put some suffering into this recovery thing though, that was the one thing that drove me crazy about Firefly: everyone gets shot or stabbed and heals so quickly!! This little piece would've been beautiful in the show! |
| leiasky 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseTee hee. Down is harder...heh. Love the Kaylee/Simon stories. I hope you have a lot more because I've loved all of your other stories that I've read so far. |
| Red Bess Rackham 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseSo cute. I saw the movie "Serenity" just not too long ago and then later I found out that it was made from a TV show that was cancelled. My friend Jess happened to havet he series on DVD, so I borrowed it from her and am currently watching the episodes! This was really cute. I think you captured Simon and Kaylee well. They are the sweetest couple! :) Anyways, there were a lot of typos and stuff, but it was still good. ~Red Bess Rackham |
| Falcon Horus 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, so sweet...lovely!! |
| Offending Shadow 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea that Simon would have explained, as well as that he wouldn't apologize out-right. The 'King Lear' allusion was lovely, and very River. Simon's dialogue didn't feel entirely in character; he spoke a little more like Kaylee at times, but it still played nicely and moved quickly. Well done. |
| Maj-Mayhem 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseExcept for the spelling mistakes I can't find anything else to critique. You very nicely and succinctly caught the very essence of the show; the moments. It is the moments of interaction between the characters, in between the larger issues, that to my mind made such a huge impact on people. Well done. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. yours truly, Maj-Mayhem |
| MysticalSpirits 2004-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abusejust to let you know, it's Shepherd BOOK, not BROOKS, and it's WASH, not WALSH. anywho, i still like this fic! |
| mystical spirits 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abusewish you'd continue... |
| CrisLC 2004-03-03 ch 1, | abuseWell written (tho with some minor typos -- a five-minute proofreading might help). You definitely capture the tension between Simon & Kaylee very well, and your dialogue is the perfect dialect for each character. Did you write this after seeing all the other episodes? Just wondering because the characters have a depth that I could never have extrapolated from just the Pilot. Nice job. |
| Glacier-to-be 2004-01-30 ch 1, | abusevery sweet, I think this is very very god. (german/french accent, queue) |
| Freedom Rhodes 2002-12-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, man. This is the best Firefly story I have read yet. I want more. |
| MinnieMay 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuseAwww! Great story! Gotta love Kayle/Simon. ^_^ I'm starting a page of Kayle fic and I was wondering if I could put this and A Day of Prayer up. Please email me at: buffyleap@hotmail.com to get back to me ^_^ great story! |
| Catlimere 2002-10-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat moment between Kaylee and Simon. Love it! Hope you'll write more as the show continues. |
| Sapphire Rose 2002-10-14 ch 1, | abusegaaah! How happy you've made me with a Simon/Kaylee fic! WHEEE! |
| MoonWolf 2002-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt flowed wonderfully...very nice writing style. |