This is a well written story, but I find the idea of Anakin Skywalker or even Darth Vader as a wife abuser rather difficult to imagine.

That is so sad! I really doubt he would hit her though. BUt I love th song! Im gonna have 2 d/l it

Very touching... Good work.

A very good look at the deteroriation of Anakin and Amidala's marriage. Good work.

wow, this is very powerful. The one teensy thing that i disagree with is Padme. She seems a bit weak and soppy. The way i see her, she would probably try and hit Anakin back! Padme is very don't get me wrong - i really did love it!

That was good. I think this deserves a continueation, don't you?

man, Anakin's a real ! you should make a sequel where Anakin gets his sanity back and begs forgiveness from Amidala. By the way, it was a great fic!

That was really good sequal please? :) :)

:-( Noo I didn't like it it was so sad :-( It was really well written tho, a good story.

Sad, and it was well written. But I can honestly say I enjoy your other works more. Even if he *is* the future Vader- something just makes it very hard for me to envision Anakin physically abusing Amidala (or calling her a ): I guess I always saw him as more of the type to simmer in his own anger instead of have it explode so freely.

Good work! I liked this a lot...you have really captured the flavor and the dialogue of the movies. Keep it up!

*sobs, chokes on tears* It was... sooooooooooo sadddddd! I swear I can't stop crying! It was great though. It really showes some of today's realife problems, making it quite realisitc. Man, I won't be able to stop sobbing for a least an hour now!

Oh so sad, I can't imagine Ani ever hitting Ami. It is a great fic but I like the other ones about your AU much more

GREAT story! I really liked it.

Well i'll be hones with you.I liked you're other two songfic's better,but this one wasnt bad,it's just that the theme is ,i havent given up hope that you'll turn those two into an is the last thing to go... ;)