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HolyKnight5
2009-03-24 . chapter 4
WAAH!? No More of this!?
masaki yang yi1
2008-11-29 . chapter 4
Not bad for a Ranma/Akane story,and the Duke Nukem crossover
was pretty good. But a gun toting kasume take's the cake.

All in all very good and very funny.
TegwenielWestwind
2006-12-03 . chapter 4
Fun story to read. Makes me wish I had played more Duke Nukem games. I like how you've altered the cast. The action scenes seem a little boring to me; probably because of how little tension I feel about them, but I'm not completely sure why they're boring. I'd like to see a little more drama and comedy, but that's just personal preference. :D
deepali
2006-08-12 . chapter 4
this was very... masculine.
The Unknowing
2005-11-26 . chapter 1
Does anyone know if Carrotglace is alive? I mean if he is reading this, for the love of crapiese update at least two of your GREAT stories, just stop the dull pain of not seeing a conclusion to one of these great premises with great executions.

It is between you and that Jurai Knight (Quantum Destinies) fellow for having great fanfics that you don't look to have a finish.
Andreiush
2004-11-01 . chapter 4
I had a lot of fun reading this! I usually don't enjoy AU but this was good! It wouldn't hurt to see some more R&A interaction, if u know what i mean..
Looking forward for the next chapter! Keep up the good work
Chaos Angel
2004-10-20 . chapter 4
WOW! That was amazing. It's been a long time since I've read a good story and your story deserves a lot more than a measely A+. Anyways keep up the good work. And I hope your internet problem is fixed as soon as possible. I can hardly wait til you update. :)
exyvixen
2004-08-04 . chapter 4
im sorta gettin impaitent, i like this story, alot. and ur not updateing. is there no god? jeez
Sierra-Falls
2004-07-28 . chapter 4
Heh, I like how you've situated the Tendo family. Akane a natural sniper, and Kasumi ranking up there as a multifunctional soldier. Now if you can get Nabiki to start as a quartermaster or financer, then you've got the beginnings of an quasi-military mercenary outfit. Heh, keep up the good work, and I hope your internet access difficulties clear up.
Sierra-Falls
2004-07-28 . chapter 3
Bwah hahahaha!

"Is there not a slightly less worthy warrior among you?!" Kuno finally shows some sense that he's bitten off a bit more than he can chew.

Its also interesting to note that Kuno doesn't come off as completely stupid and moronic. He's got that moronic anti-hero thing going on and while he's supremely delusional that he's the hero, he still has his moments.

Does that even make sense? Anyway, great additions, now update Gaijin!
ZeroTolerance
2004-07-21 . chapter 4
awsome !! O.o MORE MORE ^_^ keep up the good work ^_^
Rajin
2004-06-07 . chapter 4
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This is great! keep it cmoing!
Morrolan
2004-02-04 . chapter 4
Kasumi is into bondage...hehehehe! I love it. This is a great story.
Pinku
2004-01-30 . chapter 4
This was just awesome. I was completely immersed in the story as there was no poor or akward writing (a rarity on this site, ^^; ), and dammit, it was fun to read. I should resent you for making me want more like this but can't! XD I hope there's another coming out. ^^
Cyran
2004-01-30 . chapter 4
Good to see that your still in it. A lot of good authors have stopped writing over the last year or so too.
Anyway, good chapter, neat to see that if Akane met Kodachi under different circumstances that they could get along. Also funny to see the changes in the rest of the cast Ranma has caused by being raised by Duke. And the Kasumi-Tofu relationship has been completely turned on its ear. Which is good but I've got to wonder if Tofu survived or not.
As usual, I'm looking forward to your next release. Go Carrot!
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