 excessivelyperky 2009-11-28 . chapter 14Lovely wedding! I'm glad that Snape went. And I hope that both Severus and Hermione can survive and have a wedding of their own. (as for St. Lily, it's clear that Severus feels that she was perfect and did absolutely nothing--not even flirting with her friend's tormentor--to deserve having her called a name, even though she called him one, too).
Ahem. Very good chapter. |
 Maddie50 2009-10-19 . chapter 14Lucius is one scary S.O.B. What if the bad guy is the Headmaster? |
 watin77 2009-10-12 . chapter 14this is amazing, your characters and plot lines have great depth and neat quirks. this is definitely going on story alert. please update soon! |
 Cyera 2009-10-12 . chapter 14Cool
More please!
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 Iris Belle 2009-08-31 . chapter 14*shiver* at that rate, I'm starting to think the death eaters have the real Remus and the person here is the traitor ... Switch made during the attack? And tonks obliviated? Farfetched, but your story is so unpredictable. Please update soon!! Excellent writing. |
 kiskax 2009-08-27 . chapter 14Severus needs to get back to Padma before Sirius kills her.
I'm on tenterhooks. |
 kiskax 2009-08-27 . chapter 13Sirius is the traitor, I can feel it. He has a vendetta against Dumbledore. |
 kiskax 2009-08-27 . chapter 12Harry, hope he's not the harbinger of doom. |
 kiskax 2009-08-16 . chapter 11no ideas about the crystalline substance.
Brilliant chapter, by the way. pigeons, excellent. very low-profile. |
 kiskax 2009-08-14 . chapter 10The headmaster is being a complete d*ck. Hermione needs to summon the sword of gryffindor and slice her way out.
good chapter! |
 H.L.B 2009-08-14 . chapter 14 Welcome back! I admit I had to go back to the beginning, but I did recall a lot, which speaks to the strength of the writing and the story in the first place.
I like this universe (in that Lupin, Tonks, and Severus are still around...) and will be waiting to see how it all works out in this particular world. I expected many of the deaths within the canon, particulary Severus'. They were hard but the one that really ticked me off was poor Dobby.
You don't need me to tell you that you're an excellent writer and story teller. It is such a pleasure to read a quality fanfic!
Good prayers to you and yours... HLB |
 emer from ireland 2009-08-09 . chapter 14 this is a brilliant story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope all is going well with your health and pregnancy, wishing you every joy. |
 LessThan3hree 2009-08-08 . chapter 14Oh, I love it. It's quite... haunting, the way you've described how war has affected each person. It almost seems... hopeless for Harry and the Order. Anyways, it's so beautifully written, I can't wait to read more. :) |
 att 2009-08-08 . chapter 14 welcom back! |
 kiskax 2009-08-07 . chapter 7Italian is such a beautiful language. I am better with German, any equally sexy language, though in a different way. I digress. Good chapter. |