Beautiful, no words can express how awesome and heartbreaking this was

I went in thinking, 'ok it's a sad story idea but I know for a fact I won't cry'. Well I was wrong, right when Gohan started his story telling with Goten I started to get hysterical. It was the most beautiful story I ever read on this site. Thanks for making me think about how important the people in my life are and how even when there gone, there not. Thank you.

Awww. What a sad but loving story. This story SHOULD only have one chapter.

-Thanks:)

it was so sad

was so sad I cried and cried

this story gave me chills, i absolutely loved it!

I cried reading this...

The story was beautiful...Written perfectly...

You did an amazing job!

*Cries*

god T.T

I LOVE YOU GOTEN!

At first I thought I wouldn't cry, but after the first paragraph I ended up bawling. Your such a great writer keep up the good work. The end was very touching.

Oh God, you were right. This is a tear-jerker... Poor Goten!

(sobs for a few hours)

That made me cry...Honestly. I loved it. Still crying...

So sad...

But I really liked it. I almost cried when I read it, it's too bad that Goten had to die so young...

I loved the part where Gohan took Goten out if the house, and when he told him the little story... It was beautiful, but still sad... *sniffles* TT

I bet you cried while writing this story, I nearly cried just reading it, it was so sad, a boy that young to be sick and then die.

But just out of curiosity, why didn't you have Gohan to gather the Dragonballs and wish away Goten's sickness like Goku Jr. did for his Grandma Pan?

I know that since Goten died on natural courses, he couldn't be wished back to life, being brought back with the Dragonballs do have it's catch, it have to be murder or killed accidentally to be brought back to life. If you died of old age or of a sickness, the dragonball cannot bring you back, so Goten won't be coming back...

I liked Goten, he was a funny boy, and he says the darnest things, just watching him on TV makes me laugh as he gets into mischief with his buddy, Trunks

I'm absolutely BAWLING!

From what I could tell this is beautiful writing...it's kind of hard to read when you're crying...