aw:D i love your stories:D please write another chapter soon -Charlotte

hey i really really like your stories, im working my way through them all, i just have one request... can you please finish this story and A Ladies Shield...
itd be great if i could find out what happens next
ttfn

i cant wait to read more! your story is amazing =)

FINISH THIS! IT'S HAPPY!

Very good story ! I really hope you plan to update soon and keep this story going ! It's one of the best Night World stories i have read ! =)

This has always been one of my favorite stories, I'm so glad you're revisiting it. I always thought Alisha was particularly easy to relate to even if we don't see much of her in the other stories, maybe because she is human or maybe because she is so haunted by a past that winds itself into her present!

dis is awesome

It's been a while since i've read your stuff, and it's still as good as i'd remembered it! I keep getting the author alerts for your stories and i keep going 'i'll really have to read that shit one day!'

So i'm back to finish this one first. Fantastic storyline, you really have created such an awesome nightworld community which although complicated manages to work, and always manages to amaze me. So now i'm off to your website to seek out the next parts of it.

You are so great for keeping on going all these years, nice to know that even if Smith herself won't finished what she started then others are ready to step up! You should write your own version of strange fate. I'd love you. I'd finally have the closure i need to move on with my life lol.

Well done chic

Great story. Suspenseful and interesting. So good that I have nothing else to say for the time being.

Ay! You wrote the next chapter! Hugs and kisses!
"Are you a complete moron? I'm a Redfern, babe, and you just attacked a member of my family. I can do whatever I want."
I have to admit, that is one awesome line! Totally Redfern, it had me almost rolling on the floor laughing! Also, another nice touch was the excerpt from the Daybreak files, where it says that Cougar murdered Blue. Oh, I had so much fun imagining what Blue's reaction to that would be! It's a nice touch to Cougar's character that he had a really nice, caring relationship once, and now that Alisha is back, we can sort of see a softer side to him...
Anyways, thanks a million for posting! I can't wait to read some more.
Shang Leopard
PS. Your dedication gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside! Thank you!!

It's actually One Republic's Apologize with Timbaland adding sound effects.

Ooh! This story is getting interesting. So this is a re-write? I look forward to reading more of it. Oh and I like the Cougar and Alisha moments.

Love this chapter. It was brilliant. I'm loving the build up of tension. The confrontation between Tali and David was interesting.

And, just thought you should be aware one of your paragraphs has turned into this:

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Hi Ki!

Will the alert for the fifth part of this story I had to start at the beginning. It's been a while since I've read it.

An interesting beginning. I loved the way that the past and the present seemed to mingle together until it was almost impossible to tell them apart. Alsiha is a rather interesting character.

I hope you don't mind but I spotted the below;

"inseparable as she nad he had not been." - I'm a tad confuzzeled by this part of the sentence - just worked it out, the nad should be and right?

You've also got a typo here: "YHow you bewitched me."

There are also a couple of instances where there are full stops instead of commars.

OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!
THIS IS SO AMAZING!! WHY DOES IT STOP HERE!! WHY!! CRUEL WORLD WHY!
You do realize that you have a future as a torturer! All you have to do is start an amazing story and then leave off half-way!
I am never stop bugging you until you finish this story!
I'll haunt you to your death-bead just to read the rest!
Shang Leopard