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Death's Counterfeit 2008-08-02 ch 5,	abuseIt's been a while since i've read your stuff, and it's still as good as i'd remembered it! I keep getting the author alerts for your stories and i keep going 'i'll really have to read that shit one day!' So i'm back to finish this one first. Fantastic storyline, you really have created such an awesome nightworld community which although complicated manages to work, and always manages to amaze me. So now i'm off to your website to seek out the next parts of it. You are so great for keeping on going all these years, nice to know that even if Smith herself won't finished what she started then others are ready to step up! You should write your own version of strange fate. I'd love you. I'd finally have the closure i need to move on with my life lol. Well done chic
GlassSplinter 2008-06-04 ch 5,	abuseGreat story. Suspenseful and interesting. So good that I have nothing else to say for the time being.
Shang Leopard 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abuseAy! You wrote the next chapter! Hugs and kisses! "Are you a complete moron? I'm a Redfern, babe, and you just attacked a member of my family. I can do whatever I want." I have to admit, that is one awesome line! Totally Redfern, it had me almost rolling on the floor laughing! Also, another nice touch was the excerpt from the Daybreak files, where it says that Cougar murdered Blue. Oh, I had so much fun imagining what Blue's reaction to that would be! It's a nice touch to Cougar's character that he had a really nice, caring relationship once, and now that Alisha is back, we can sort of see a softer side to him... Anyways, thanks a million for posting! I can't wait to read some more. Shang Leopard PS. Your dedication gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside! Thank you!!
o_o 2008-05-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseIt's actually One Republic's Apologize with Timbaland adding sound effects.
Bex Drake 2008-05-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseOoh! This story is getting interesting. So this is a re-write? I look forward to reading more of it. Oh and I like the Cougar and Alisha moments.
Bex Drake 2008-05-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseLove this chapter. It was brilliant. I'm loving the build up of tension. The confrontation between Tali and David was interesting. And, just thought you should be aware one of your paragraphs has turned into this: "Anyway, ignore Jepar - he's a shapeshifter, and he's a cat at that. Which means he always thinks he's right, but if you give him some string to play with, he's happy for theì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# ì¥Á 7 ð ¿ ' bjbjU U ?¨ 7 7 ÿÿ ÿÿ ÿÿ l Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Ö Ô# Ô# Ô# Ô# d with what she knew to be that subtle, stinging hurt that Ieran had showed too."
Bex Drake 2008-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseHi Ki! Will the alert for the fifth part of this story I had to start at the beginning. It's been a while since I've read it. An interesting beginning. I loved the way that the past and the present seemed to mingle together until it was almost impossible to tell them apart. Alsiha is a rather interesting character. I hope you don't mind but I spotted the below; "inseparable as she nad he had not been." - I'm a tad confuzzeled by this part of the sentence - just worked it out, the nad should be and right? You've also got a typo here: "YHow you bewitched me." There are also a couple of instances where there are full stops instead of commars.
Shang Leopard 2008-04-23 ch 4,	abuseOH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH! THIS IS SO AMAZING!! WHY DOES IT STOP HERE!! WHY!! CRUEL WORLD WHY! You do realize that you have a future as a torturer! All you have to do is start an amazing story and then leave off half-way! I am never stop bugging you until you finish this story! I'll haunt you to your death-bead just to read the rest! Shang Leopard
angel 2004-07-31 ch 4, anon.	abuseoh my gosh! how can u b so evil leaving it at a cliff hanger seriously please write more i really luv thiz story n cant wait 4 n update keep writing cuz all ur ficz r gr8 luv angel x
Skysha-Tranqui 2004-05-14 ch 4,	abuseJust wanted to see if you were still updating this fic or not, because I'm really interested to know what happens next!
Shiegra 2004-05-06 ch 4, anon.	abuseAWESOME!
Adelaide E 2003-10-20 ch 4,	abuseAs silly as it is, considering I'm already familiar with the story, I find myself incredibly caught up with these chapters! I apologize for not reviewing recently, but I still love this story. I love Ali, and I love her relationship with Cougar, and I love hating David y Pain-in-the-ass. All right, that'll be all for this ridiculously long review. I hope find time to update this in between the Chimera chapters.
irishmoonrose 2003-08-15 ch 4, anon.	abuseFrom the summary I wasn't sure if I would like it. I gave it a chance though. I love it. Please update.
K'Ranna 2003-07-03 ch 4,	abuseAgh! Frustrated growl A huge chunk turned into meaningless symbols... it was that part right after Jepar tells Toya he was wrong. I tried refreshing, didn't work, tried going to your site, the new version wasn't up... I'm gonna start tearing my hair out now! A-HEM But that was good! My guess is it's Blue that at the very end. Wonders if she's right Damn, that boy just gets everywhere, doesn't he? >.> I was wondering, could I become one of your beta readers, if you have any? Cuz that would be totally fun!
Zabella 2003-07-02 ch 4,	abuseNice to see you back Ki (grins). I always found this story really powerful and sad..great to see it again and being tweaked up!

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