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Reviews for: After The Storm Part 3 : My Sacrifice
egwene105 9/16/04 . chapter 4
Great story, keep updating!
Kina Elduin 3/26/03 . chapter 4
Nice story.

Hope to read more soon! _
Z 3/26/03 . chapter 4
ah, so good! The right amount of everthing! Con't it!
CinderellaxVan 3/21/03 . chapter 4
*_* *adds story to favorites* Fluff! LOVE THE FLUFF! And stupid Feliciana, get out of the way! *scowls* And poor Van, those nightmares... *sniffs* I really do love this story, update soon! Excellent description and the lovey dovey moments are so fluffy Great job! Keep writing!

-CxV
hitomi-chan 3/21/03 . chapter 4
that was really good! great job- that was so sweet, with van stealing kisses! not that hitomi minds:p keep up with the good job and c ya in the next chappy review!

hitomi-chan-
Shuro 1/29/03 . chapter 3
3rd chapter was soooo good that I cant wait to read more! please write more soon! And let me tell you that I love the way you keep your storys from bbeing lame while still full of romance!
mystic ice 1/26/03 . chapter 3
this is a really good fanfic for escaflowne! it's like what would actually happen at the end of the series!

to the author of this fanfic: keep up the good work with those nice flowery verbs! it makes the story very intriging!
fallen-dark-angel 1/25/03 . chapter 3
really good story!
Danielle 1/25/03 . chapter 3
I like your ideas of the story. There really interesting to read and I hope you continue soon, cause I want to know what happens.

bye bye for now.
Lok 1/25/03 . chapter 3
This.

Is.

GOOD!

try adding the dsescriptions of smells and rooms though, eg, what did Van's mother's dress look like? How did the palace smell? what did the musical instruments sound like?

they may sound like obvious things, but i'v seen more than one profesional author miss these things out.

[adds to 'Fave author' list]
silver sea star not logged in 10/18/02 . chapter 2
Sounds good so far. :) I'm glad she's back on Gaea again. Please continue...
Shuro 10/4/02 . chapter 1
How many parts of AFTER THE STORM will you have? Not that I mind, actualy I look foward reading anything you write because you have a great style!

And altough I prefer Dryden and Millerna and also like V/H paring! Cant wait to read more!
Shuro 10/4/02 . chapter 2
OH, that was soooooo sweet!
R.D 10/4/02 . chapter 1
greatttttt storyyyyyyy! i can't wait for the next chappter!
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