Wow, this was fantastic! Very well written, and I could really relate to the character. Great job!

I love this i thought it was fab!!

Normally i add points for improvement but i genuinly cant think of any!

Well, this really could have happened. Thanks for keeping her annonymous. She could have been a Gryffindor in Percy's year. We never did find out any girls in that year. This could even be Audrey, the woman Percy is said to have married on JKR's recently revealed hand-written family tree.

write more please! if you want to. this is good.

Touching.

Ah! I love it! There aren't nearly enough Percy fics out there, but this is definitly a great story. I love it! :D

*sniffs* I cried! I cried!! AH! I CRIED!
I want you to do a sequel on this! I want the, er, girl and Percy to be togetheeeer! aaaah!
Your story is the best one-shot fic I've ever read!

*sob, sob* Oh, that was lovely! *sniffle* It's so sad!

Please continue this fic! I think you might have wanted it to be a one-shot, but I really think it should be continued. You write well--unfortunately, I cannot say that for all...--and it would be so *pout* TRAGIC if you stopped this here! *dramatic pose*

*blinks curiously* Oh, by the by, who is the girl talking?

Toodle pip,
~Lanti~

Wow...this was really good...and so well written....I loved it! :)

Just gorgeous. =)

Oh wow. This was just so sweet! I loved it! Great job! :)

Wow. Really- that was amazing. I am the biggest Percy fan, and I don't see enough Percy-appreciation fics to feed my addiction.

*adds story to her favorites list*

This is fabulous! Usually I don't like heterosexual romances, but this one is really good. Your characacter, her thought and emotional patterns, you describe here seems so real; is it a bit autobiographical, perhaps?

that was really lovely. absolutely beautiful writing. and so honest i knew i guy like that in highschool. just one thing 7th year would be the N.E.W.T.s not the O.W.L.s but that's a small thing. i love this story

It's a wonderful fic! It sums Percy up perfectly! And not putting a name on the girl helped - a lot of OCs out there who could follow the example you set.