okay so im in the middle of reading this chapter and i come to Big McLargeTall! Oh my god! i can't stop laughing! i said i have to review right now! so i just wanted you to know that i think that is one of the best names i've heard givin to him in such a long time! well back to the story! i love it by the way!
--angieeL.A

I love this story. I love the way you cover both perspectives. You have a really great gift of writing.

Hey columbiachica!

I just read your story and I'm sad because there are no more parts :( Was this really the last one? Or did you just stop writing it? God, it's one of the best FFs I've ever read!! Both of the characters are so great in it and it's a very good idea to write from their views.

Just wanted to tell you that :)
Kisses,
Nóra

Oh my god! I have to say this is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read... love it, love it, love it!

I've read alot of your work but this one is definitly up there with your best. The only thing I don't like is the points of view. I wish you;d just pick one and just have i from one point of view each time! besides that REALLY good, please update

WOW! this was an amazing story! One Of your best!

Hey!


I love all of your stories. This one, is so interesting. I love how you make them fight, but it some strange and obsurd way, it is kinda cute. I think that when you udate (hopefully soon, wink wink, nudge, nudge) that you wil put some major PDA in there and make everyone all jealous (aka Dean) I think that would be really cute. But anyways, continue writing, it is great, really!!!!

Daisy
p.s. email me if ya want to :0)

An interesting and surprisingly effective approach to the story; it works very well, if you were wondering. Your grip on Rory and Jess' voices was a little shaky initially (a few off-kilter word choices, mostly), but it's getting stronger with every part. I liked The Storeroom (both versions) a *lot*, and I hope to see more.

That was great.

Oh, Gosh. Thank you! I was so excited to see that you had finally updated! That chapter was awesome! Is this the end of the story, or are you going to go on? Anyway, you rock, your story rocks, and all of your writing for that matter rocks!

I have nothing more intelligent to say than WRITE MORE!!!!!!

wow... loved it... most likely the best chapter in the this story so far

This has got to be my all time favorite Gilmore Girl story. You are a fabulous writer and I look forward to every update. You have a gift! JESS AND RORY FOREVER!!!

Another wonderful chapter, filled with emotion and drama. The best part though? The kiss of course! Finally! Great job, and I'm waiting for the next chapter

Yay! I really enjoy the whole 2 POVs thing,it's a great puzzle. Jess' reaction to Rory's "do u wanna be with me" question was perfect, very Jess-like. I'm, anxious to know what's next. Keep up the great work!