Reviews for Illusions Decieve, Illusion Decieved

Reviews For: Illusions Decieve, Illusion Decieved

Silver Moon30 2002-12-17 ch 25,	abusesmiles That was one heck of a great story! Oh! Did I forget to mention? I'm a friend of Auroris and I've just looked at a few reviews she gave you earlier. Yes, what she said is very true, but I see you may have taken it a little teeny weeny too seriously. She's just a VERY addicted reader who's read about a thousand books before, and I'm not exaggerating! By the way, don't worry if she screams at you...she's always a bit hyper online wink and very violent too....shivers lucky she's not like that in reality...or I'd be well...you don't wanna think about it...anyways, that's just my opinion. Oops! I'm totally going off topic! Forgot this was a review! Sorry...ahem, so, besides good, I really don't know what to say. I do kind of have the same suggestion as Auroris though, you really should make your chapters a bit longer...unless you wanted them to be short on purpose (like me...I'm so lazy...)And...that's about it...no more comments except....WRITE MORE!!!! Me like your stories! Auroris: HEY THAT'S MY LINE! chases Silver Moon with 200 pound mallet
Auroris 2002-11-06 ch 25,	abuseYAY!!!! does a cartwheel WOOHOO!!! performs a backward somersault YOU TOOK MY ADVICE!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! does a backward flip, ends up banging head on the floor Ah...never do acrobatic tricks when untrained. I'm glad that you promised that you'd TRY to take my advice. And WOW!!! You've alread finished your story?! You're going to write a sequel right? You better do so!!!!!! You better write another sequel to this story!!!!! Rac is just getting into her true element, it seems to me, so you MUST WRITE MORE ABOUT HER!!!!!!! And just curious, are you British?
tetris 2002-11-06 ch 25, anon.	abuseWait, are you saying unless you don't get more reviews you won't continue? Or is this the last chapter? And if it's because of the reviews: PEOPLE REVIEW!!!! I love this story and want to see it finished so I know what happens to Rac.
Auroris 2002-11-02 ch 1,	abuseHIYA RALIENA!!!! sigh I feel so bad at flaming at you before. I hope I didn't hurt your feelings! And I'm sending another review as you've said that you need more reviews...SO I'M GONNA SEND YOU AS MANY REVIEWS AS POSSIBLE!!!! And I'm glad that you reviewed my story, I hope that I didn't make you feel FORCED to do so, but can you tell me WHY you won't make my chapters longer? Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please TELL ME!!!! I hope you'll finish this fanfic besides the low amount of reviews you have. Don't forget that some people are LOVING you story right now...winks ;) Will you write another sequel to "Illusions Decieve, Illusion Decieved"? It's because Rac is SUCH an interesting character with her powers and personality...I also hope you're going follow my story the same way I've followed your story!!! That doesn't mean I'M DEMANDING REVIEWS!!!!!! Just read it, it comforts me that someone is reading my hard, well-thought out fanfic works. I'll send more reviews later!! Farewell! ~Auroris, Herald of Hope~
Auroris 2002-10-25 ch 23,	abusesigh I may sound I'm flaming but I don't mean to. HOW COME YOU NEVER GIVE FEEDBACK TO THE REVIEWERS?!?!?!?!?!?! Most fanfic authours I've read have replied back to their reviewers by answering them in a tiny paragraph at the beginning of the story. BUT YOU DON'T!!! It wouldn't kill you to do so would it? Besides, if you did so readers would be more interested in giving back reviews to you. And why won't you make your chapters longer? Please, please, please can't you do so? Tell me why. And may you describe your story a bit better? During situations you could be more descriptive. (Reviewer's note: I know I sound like I'm flaming at you and if you're deeply hurt, I allow you the right to murderer me. notices millions of angry of Raliena fans growling at Auroris umm...Do you mind taking a rain check on my death being caused by your hands? 'Cause I think this is a REALLY good time for me to goooo...!!! dashes off as fans give chase) ~Auroris, the Herald of Hope~
tetris 2002-10-19 ch 16, anon.	abuseOUUU CONTINUE PLZ!!!!!!
Sioned136 2002-10-18 ch 16,	abusethe suspence is great, more please!
Sioned136 2002-10-16 ch 14,	abuseokay, okay, here goes. the plot is well, good. The only problem with this is that Rac is a bit of an omnipotenet being, a.k.a. not that fun to read about. Give her some sort of problem or issue that she really has to face and succede in. True she hasn't exactly been able to free the x-men, but still. Give her a fear that Magneto will act on, give Judas something else to bring up, just something. other then that, good job, and finish up.
Auroris 2002-10-14 ch 10,	abuseHmm....a bit iffy at the beginning of the story, a bit boring. Then when Rac began talking with Magneto in Chapter 9: The Decision, the story was getting into full motion! I wished that you made your chapters a bit longer though. My favourite chapter of the story so far is Chapter 9. That part was written amazingly!!! Keep on writing!!! ~Auroris~
Ruinwen 2002-10-10 ch 6,	abusevery, very good, rac. WRITE MORE OR I WILL KILL U!
Eileen 2002-10-08 ch 5,	abuseOkay, I've read this over a few times, and I still can't get a handle on your new characters. I feel like I don't know who they are or why they're here. But maybe it's me. The story itself is great. I hope you continue no matter how many reviews you get. (Hey, it's better than having ten flames, isn't it?)
Hayley 2002-10-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseO.K......first off...WHY WON'T SHE DIE!!!!!! ur sister i mean. Second...u have a twin sister...isn't it the other way around?!? please don't kill me...i value my life and should never have opened my mouth!! S.O.S SOMEONE SAVE MEEEEEEE!!!!!

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