again great story very clever - bit of a cliffhanger though hope it is continued

I really like the story it was great. I liked the end, I hope that it will bee a continuing on the story.

Im from Sweden Åkersberga

very good

Lets get it on!

nice job. i don't watch the show enough to really know when all of this is taking place, but it was pretty good. a note, though: i notice when you want to put emphasis on a word, you put asterisks around it, and when someone thinks, it has brackets around it. generally, what people are thinking and words that are emphasized are italicized. (just thought you might want to know, for future reference.)