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| lamako 2004-10-30 ch 10,  | abuseOww, this was probably the best fanfic I've read. I realy realy realy loved it. it was so cute how grissom talked to sara. I hope you write an other fanfic this good. laura |
| AMY 2003-12-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseI know this is posted in the middle of a finished work, but I just wanted to say I really like Sara in this chapter. You're doing a great job with the prospect of abuse in this fic. Amazing job! AMY |
| Tanner 2003-12-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseNot bad at all for a first work. Watch out for grammar and spelling. But overall I really enjoyed it. I really love the sequel as well. You're doing a great job! -Tanner |
| Peggiegg 2002-10-15 ch 10, | abuseVery nicely done! Everyone stayed so in character right down to the end! Thanks for an enjoyable read! |
| Desirae 2002-10-14 ch 10, | abuseFavorite line... "Grissom, the feeling is mutual." I love it! Really glad that Nick got him with that evidence and slightly disappointed we didn't getta see Sara show Eric who ended up stronger. *beg* *beg* LIsa |
| Forensiphile 2002-10-14 ch 10, | abuseWow, this was just so riveting from start to finish. I loved the last G/S conversation. A lot of depth and resonance there. Great work!! Post more soon! :-) |
| Desirae 2002-10-11 ch 8, | abuseI have to let ya know I was beyond excited when I got home and saw that this was updated! WOO HOO! I'm glad that Gris is finally listening to Catherine and taking her advice. Painful chapters but beautifully written. Lisa |
| Desirae 2002-10-09 ch 6, | abuseI just started to read this fan fic! It's so amazing! I LOVE IT! Please get more up soon! I'm in dier need of more! |
| Captain Pocky 2002-10-08 ch 6, | abuseOOOOOOOOO!! I have to know what happens after this!! PLease continue and Sara totally kicks butt. More of Sara kicking butt, please. |
| Rachel14 2002-10-08 ch 6, | abuseOMG! Don't stop! I love this fic! Keep up the great work! |
| Peggiegg 2002-10-08 ch 6, | abuseExcellent story. You have a good grasp of the characters. Can't wait for more. |
| Manigault 2002-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm liking this story. Good for Sara sticking up for herself. I'm looking forward to seeing how Grissom approaches her and the situation. |
| Grav 2002-10-08 ch 6, | abuseThree cheers for you! You update more than one chapter at a time!!! Not that there's anything wrong with suspense...but still. Anyway, I am really liking this plot, and your characterizations are excellent too. Eric is freaky and scary, excellent villain. Keep Going :) Grav |
| Rachel14 2002-10-07 ch 3, | abuseI totally, absolutly love the story! hehe, I love the ones about Sara and her past life. Keep up the great work! |
| csisk8rchica 2002-10-07 ch 3, | abusegr8 story i want more more momre please please please please (like now) |