que lindooooo

honestly, i love your story BUT there are parts that are confusing. it would be better if you indicate where the story of the couple begin and end. example: i thought i was reading about lantis and hikaru, and silly me, it was about umi and clef. BUT this is nice.

So touching! Though I wished I can get my hands on the guy who did what he did to Umi...

This story is a must-read.

Even if it starts way too defressing it gets quite more cheery and fluffy as it goes on. a must-read.

Great story. loved it!

Thank you thank you for the wonderful story! It was hard to read at first, but then all happy at the end! Ya! *claps*

Nice story

oh, dang! i was saving this story for a bit-by-bit reading thing..but it was soo interesting..

truly one of the best rayearth sagas... AWESOMENESS

this is really really good

I likey the story.. HAH! THAT RHYMES! *ahem*. shall read more later!

LUV LUV LUV this story! its one of the few rayearth stories that aren't too sappy or over dramatic, or just plain boring. i could actually see this happening! thx for a good read. could you recommend some good rayearth fics?

Whew. I finally finished your story. I like how you wrapped up everything nicely. Great ending. Although, I *was* rooting for Eagle :(

But, that's okay, cuz Lantis is cute too .

btw... what did you do to Primera? (Nothing horrible, I hope _)

Wow. You weren't kidding about the angsty part. Thirteen chapters of straight angst! I normally stay away from heavy angst, but yours got me hooked. That said, I'll go read the rest now.

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Wow...I'm speechless. This fic is so good. I'm stunned. You did everything perfect. Mo, really, you did.:D