Oh my goodness I positively loved this piece! It is so adorable the way you put all of this together! You had a few speling and grammar mistakes but certainly not enough to bother the story's flow. Good luck with the rest of your works.

-cheers,

Riasan9

that was beautiful I think I'm going to cry man I'm all teary eyed now anywho loved it

happy ending...
a wonderful story... i like it!
are you gonna write another one? well, if you do, don't forget to inform me... hehehe
keep up the good work!

:') aw I finaly found a good S/M

Kawaii!
He-he
Keep up the good work...
coz your fic is good that it is certainly one of my favorite stories...
I LUV MS
Wohoo!
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sad storie, but a good ending !

Aww. So sweet.

Cute.

Sad.

ok i realy know whats gonna happend next but pls still continue!;)

how sad... (

Yup! It's long but I want it longer! Bwahahahaha! 0 Evil me! I don't even update my fics! Hahaha!

So another chapter worth the waiting! Go! GO! Keep up the good work... I don't have any constructive criticism...

Ja! Write more! MORE!

*huggles oroing Ken-san*

Aww man...that was horrible...Poor Sanosuke...

Anyhow, I'll be waiting for your next chapter!

Hey! Bad Fanfiction! It completely ignored my review! No wonder it said the page was broken... well, anyway, I'm here! _

*sniff, sniff* Oh, what's happening? *wipes tear* Don't say that, Sano! Don't say goodbye...

I can never picture out Sano falling for Kaoru though _

Sad but it's a nice kinda sad and I love sad stories as long as there's a happy ending! Yeah, contradictory, I know!

Ja! I'll be waiting for the next!

AWWWW! THAT'S SO SAD! This is gonna end happy right?