THIS IS AWESOME!!
Loved it Loved it Loved it
But guess what? Gymshipping is not the best amymore. Egoshipping is. And GaryXDawn sucks! I wish it didn't even exist!

whoa... that was incredible... hehe... misty beating brock up...^_^

omg. That was so freaking cute! Not just because I like Brock/Misty, but because your writing and plot skills are excellent. It was so believable because they did both grow up in the same kind of gym leader environment.

I also loved their charaterization. Brock was so sweet, and I love that something good finally happened to him. ^^ Thanks for this!

Wow! That was amazing! ^_^
I love GymShipping, and this was a perfect example of why.
Definitely favouriting this! =D

That, was really, really adorable! I admit, Gymshipping is a bit weird for me to read because I picture Brock and Misty as having a brother-sister relationship, but I really enjoyed this story! I think you captured their young personalities perfectly =)

This was really cute; I kept waiting for Ash to wake up on Brock and Misty making out and being all "OMG WTF!?" but it was really cute, good job!

this was SO good. and i'm so happy to have read this, and pretty amused and surprised at myself that i hadn't chance upon this great brockxmisty fic earlier.. you made brock such a dearie and sweetie in here i know he could be when he wants to!! (glomps on BROCK) and misty be the bratty, sweet girl she could be. aw, you made all gymshipping fans see the reasons why we all love them so much, and why they could be such an awesome couple in just one fic. you ruule!

the world needs more of brockxmisty! and you'd better write more! (:

Wowwies.

This made me feel all shaky, like when... well, I, in the middle of the night, told a friend of mine how I felt about him.

This is exceptionally well-written--Brock's present feelings in particular.

And well-plotted. Given that I'm a rabid Pokeshipping, that's saying something.

It did drag on a little though.

Good job!

Gorgeous! Best Gymshippy I've read!

That was disgustinly cute and sweet. I loved it.

Cuteness! I had a feeling the little girl was Misty, especially when she started beating up Brock *laughs*. Original idea, and loved the last line -- it ended the fic perfectly.

And not only is there this fun oneshot, but a third installment to the Stars Fell on Pallet Town series as well? What a great day to have checked your name for updates ^_^

This is really cute! I can totally imagine young Misty giving Brock the beatdown. Gives a new meaning to 'love taps'... Good stuff!

Funness indeed. ^ ^ I *loved* little Brock and Misty. 'Twas extremely leet.

I can't believe I never saw this before! This story should be the definitive GYMshippy fic! Lol! It was cute--and so unique! I loved it! Brock is such a sweet little muffin. . .*drools* um, yeah. :) Great fic! I'm gonna put it on mah faves! :)

Well.....I still can't wrap my brain around gymshippyness. My mind just can't go there. I liked the beginning. They were acting normal! (lol) I would have enjoyed the story more if they hadn't got all snuggly at the end. The idea of the story is good, and original. I just can't see the two of them having a romantic relationship. If you had ended it without the the kiss, I would have been happier ^_^ But, it had it's good moments so I'll say I liked it. I think you are a great writer and can't wait until your next story. I hope I didn't offend you with anything I said. It's not the quality of your writing that bothered me, just the ship ^_^