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Realm of Sadfaith
2008-07-26
ch 22,
abuse..well, that sucks. Why must all the good ones be copied? 2004 Dorei Yokai was the same, too... poopies.

In all honesty, it's kind of low to be copying a... "fanfiction", or a spin off of another story. That's like as pointless as cloning a reincarnation. Fanfictions are meant to be dribbles of artistic expression, showing of creativity by using themes and characters in their own situations. For someone to steal such a personalized thing is kind of... silly.

Keep writing, even if you don't end up posting. From chapter one to this, you've improved a heck of a lot. If you keep at it, the flow will only get better. If you need someone to share your creations with, just give them out to close, real life friends who also like the series. It's a fun present for them, and often their advice helps you grow even more.

Wish you well with your imposter,

>Sadfaith
Inuboy1000
2008-07-19
ch 22,
abusegreat story
Z-L.B.
2008-05-09
ch 21,
abuseWonderful story I'm always up for some good ol fluff involving one of my favorite pairings! ~ZLB
AshleyEliz
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abusehaha too cute!
Affinitive
2008-04-27
ch 21,
abuse*dies and goes to heaven* I loved this story! What can I say, it was just adorable(:
Lisa
2008-04-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved this story!
It was really cutee=]
And grr I hate plagiarism too.
inuyashaluvskagome909
2008-04-14
ch 21,
abuseAW
OMG THIS WAS SO
KAWAII! I LOVED IT SO MUCH THAT I COULDNT SLEEP LAST NIGHT BECAUSE I WANTED TO FINISH READING IT BUT MY DAD CAME OUT AND MADE ME TURN OF THE COMPUTER!
THIS WASS REALLY REALLY WELL DONE! I LOVED THIS STORY YOUR THE BEST!
kagomesbutterflyfeeling
2008-01-30
ch 22,
abuseI have to make this short, very, VERY short, sadly. But I just want to tell you how much this story rocks! I too am a Inu/Kag fluff lover, I CAN NOT read any other story unless it is a fluffy Inu/Kag romance fic. I'm actually beginning to write one, yay, but I'm getting the first couple of chapters written at least before I post them, but keep an eye out! Whoops, I've changed the subject, sorry!
This story is so cool and well thought-out! I just loved everything! My heart ached for Inuyasha and KAgome (I'm the type who get's emotional for the characters in stories! Although, if love entered mine, or my friend's lives right now, I'd freak out, I'm only thirteen so yeah, I only like to read and watch romance, I'm not the type that screams attention and waffy romantic stuff, it surprised my friends when I told them I've read a few romance novels and that!) anyways, I just got so involved with the story, I just couldn't stop reading. I can't wait to read some of your other fics!
On another note, I can not believe someone would plagerise your story, how cruel and indecent is that! No care for all the hard work you put into it. When I read the notice thingy you posted up, I...er...was confused! Now if this problem is still exhisting just reply to this review (which I hope you do anyway ^-^) and tell me what I have to do, if the problem has been sort out, well, still reply, I'd like to talk to you!
Oh, and I want you to know how much I appreciate all the hard work you put into writing stories for people like me to read and enjoy! Thank you oh so much!
Keep up all the amazing writing!Hope to talk to you again soon!

kagomesbutterflyfeeling
InuFairy77
2007-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow! I read this story long long long time ago. Actually, this was the first fanfiction I read ever and the story that got me into writing fanfiction. My friend had told me about the story and she printed it out and let me read it, it wasn't completed then (I think it was only at ten chapters). Then I found it on Rymsie's Inuyasha a while later and read the other chapters and was completely blown away. I love your story and it sucks that someone would plagerize your hard work. That sucks. I'm happy I'm finally able to leave you a review, because this was awesome and if I never read it I probably would have never started writing. I guess I should say you inspired me.
Elfin Flame
2007-09-17
ch 22,
abuse*boils, gr* I HATE PLAGERIZERS! I have this friend who plagerized some of my poetry, and then read it out loud to the class! It wasnt the EXACT same, but it had a close to the same title and similiar idea. Everyone was all lyk, did't mimi write thta poem first? YEs, i did! I like exploded at her, were friends again, and she hasn't plagerized since. But i still boil at her easily, it's just never really been the same since then ya know? Yes, i will tell u, and give that naughty plagerizer a very strong talking to (or mesage) if i come across him/her. Anyway, ur story is os awesome, and ur soo right, we have to watch each others backs! Ill make sure to do that, for anyone...even if i dont know the person!
Elfin Flame
2007-09-17
ch 18,
abusehaha! Y-M-C-A! I love that song!
*closing eyes and concentrating* AR! Still cant imagine inu in tux! Darnit. hah...darnit...thats a weird word. Cool story.
Elfin Flame
2007-09-17
ch 15,
abuseFyi, kikyo cant bleed, and can die...sort of. Theres this ep, where she dies and inu goes to se if she really did die, and kagome gets kidnapped...and ya. And when i say, really di die, i mean, her clay body was destroyed so her soul(or whatever) was forced to like...i dunno, go to hell or whatever. I's kinda confusing. But in the end, she didn't really die, but this demon had struck it's claws through her and she like fell into a canyon.
Elfin Flame
2007-09-17
ch 14,
abuseHAH! I laughed so hard when i imagined inuyasha doin the macerana! No, seriousely, i did! A good two minutes! And i dont usually laugh at stupid things! It was probably funny just to see me laughing. Kami, i had tears sprouting from my eyes! And i still cant imagine inuyasha wearing a tuxedo, geez. Cool story!
Elfin Flame
2007-09-17
ch 13,
abuseHAH! Kikyo accepted him my **! She wanted him to become human! Did u no that? Anyway, this story rox! And, Inuyasha has met kagome's friends...in episode 160...i think. Around there somewhere!

White Ravyn
JessiBabe
2007-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH. My. GOD. i lurve ur writing style. i heart Inuyasha; but ur story really brought the characters an story to life!
r u writing anyother stories?
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