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| Covin 2002-11-01 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. A lot, actually. Sometimes it is our angst that brings out our talent, like an artists' narcotics. |
| Kerro Starbane (to lazy to ... 2002-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei shouldn't bedoing this, but i am. i'm reveiwing my own story. offically, this sucked. my descripive stuff was bad, because i didn't use any, and character portrayal was just worse than a MiSTy could make it. but my friend cheered when she wrote this, and said i should write more character death sceens. no. other than bad stuff, this truly was BAD!!!!!! say what you like, this could be greatly imporved, if i wanted too., but i don't. i leave this to be MiSTed. (Reveiw Actions in the Past!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Kerro Starbane. |
| NatThaNut 2002-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting short fic there. Are you going to continue with you other fic 'Actions in the Past' by any chance? |
| Kuzuye BB 2002-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt could very well be a good fanfic, only I was lost through half of it. Quite possibly because it's been ages since I've watched Action Man. Still try to tell me, the reader, a little more in your fics next time. |