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whitehound 5/13/07 . chapter 1
I didn't review this when I first read it - I'm not sure why - but I've got it on my recommended links pages, and find it very resonant and well done.

I'm not 100% sure about the Fool myself, although I think it's probably Neville - but I always assumed that the one in the Devil mask, whose grievances hide his first (or underlying) nature, was Snape, not Voldemort. Voldemort's first nature is just as nasty as his current one, whereas Snape seems to be a decent bloke soured by circumstances.
kasmo 2/10/07 . chapter 1
Hm, I think I've got everyone but the fool. In order, it's probably Harry, Ron, Hermione, someone, Draco and Voldemort, correct? I can't think of who the fool can be.

Sad poems describing them all, though the nicknames you gave them fit, even if it is a little mean to Ron and Hermione, since they're supposed to be a team.

I think most say Hermione is the brains, Ron the strategist, and Harry the courage and power. They do make a good team, seeing as they've been working together for so long, anyways.
Dragon Mistress Cassie 11/29/02 . chapter 1
OMG, I love all your fics and poems, but this poem just RULES! I understood every single one except Fool's Mask!

Hero - Harry

Sidekick - Ron

Helper - Hermione

Fool - couldn't be Neville, could it? O.o?

Rival - Draco

Devil - Voldemort
Wrastrix 11/2/02 . chapter 1
That was perfect!
me 10/29/02 . chapter 1
who wares the fools mask. im a bit confused. could you e-mail me with all off the anwers.

thank you
jenni 10/23/02 . chapter 1
I love the story on your webpage about the Mauraders reading the Harry Potter Books. And I agree with you that Sirus(sp)/and Remus would make an amazing couple! but please don't have Harry and Draco fall in lust/love. Make it a Harry/Ginny or Hermione romance. If you must have Draco become gay, but NEVER Harry! Please!
Malting 10/5/02 . chapter 1
Oooh... another really good one! I love the idea of people wearing maks to hide how they truly are, and this is really good. Now... lets see.

Harry wears the Hero's Mask, Ron wears the Sidekick's Mask, Hermione wears the Helper's mask, Neville wears the Fool's mask, Draco wears the Rival's mask, and Tom Riddle wears the Devil's mask.

Are you going to write any more of these? It would be really good to do ones for maybe Snape, Remus, Sirius, Pansy, and perhaps Fleur - she's an impossibly beautiful girl who would be seen as a beauty and nothing else.

Anyway, this is really really GOOD!
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