TITLE: Mine (7/?)
AUTHOR: Ally K
ARCHIVE: website in progress, fanfiction.net,
CATEGORY: POV, Angst, S/J,
SPOILERS: First Commandment
CONTENT WARNINGS: Mild language
SUMMARY: Sam learns the truth about Jack's past.
DISCLAIMER: None of this is mine; the actual story and idea is mine, but
the characters and name etc, don't belong to me.
AUTHOR'S NOTES: I am so sorry to everyone for taking so long in writing
this part, I've just have been so busy.
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She doubts him but believes *me*. She knows now that he was the one who
murdered my mother. She now even looks upon me with pity. Perhaps she is
softening to me, even liking me.maybe even more than him. Instantly she
*hates* him. I've waited for so long and finally it's starting to pay off.
Seven years I've waited. Seven years, since he murdered my mother and now I
have *her* as well. My angel. She stares at me. Unsure, of what to think,
what to believe. Everything is just so perfect. I want to celebrate but
first she must know the truth. Only then will she be fully convinced enough
to forget that bastard.
"He wouldn't kill anyone," she tells me, but her voice is full of
"*He did*, he killed my mother seven years ago and there is no denying
"*No*, I don't believe it" her voice is steadier.
How does she still trust that bastard?
"He mowed her down, then drove off."
"Hit and run." She stares at me in disbelief. "He left her to die." her
voice trails off.
"Yes, he viciously knocked her down then left her to die in pain. If he'd
called an ambulance then she would still be alive today."
"Oh God, I'm sorry". She has sympathy for me, and hates him. Perfect. Just
"Now do you believe me? Now do you see what he did?"
She nods. Victory. Revenge is so sweet. He will pay for his heartlessness.
He left her to die. I never thought he could do that to an innocent person
it's just so callous, so inhumane, so Goa'uld.. how could he? Maybe he
didn't know he'd hit someone. How could you *not* know? The sheer impact of
a human hitting the car, you couldn't exactly miss. Oh God, I was so wrong
about him. I thought he wasn't like Jonas, but he's exactly the same, both
murderers. It's me. I drive them this way. I drove Jonas to the insanity of
believing that he really was a God and Jack.wait he said seven years ago. I
hadn't even met him then.is the killer the real Jack, the one that he
merely conceals it from me.
Oh God, I'm in love with a murderer.
It was hit and run, it wasn't premeditated. True. but it makes no
difference. He still killed her, he may not have intentionally done it, but
he didn't save her when he could have. He left an innocent woman to die,
there's *nothing* colder than that. Nothing.
I throw my clothes on. I can't waste anytime. There's so much ground to
cover. It's impossible. She's like a needle in a very large haystack.
You'll never find her. I will.. I have to.
Right positive thoughts. Sam in my arms, again and me kissing her.. my
hand.is red. She's bleeding.. No! It won't happen. She's not going to die.
Think, where could she be? Would he take her far away? Yes, another
country? No, too suspicious so he would *never* get her on a plane. Anyway,
far too risky she could easily get away.. He could have taken her over the
boarder, she could be in Canada.. no, that wouldn't work either. The car
would be checked. Too dangerous. Same with Mexico so she's still in the
country, in theory. That reduces the haystack, a bit. Dammit. What else?
Um.. I don't know. He could have driven her anywhere.
Right, he took her at night so it would be less suspicious. He would want
to get her wherever they he's keeping her before daybreak, so it can't be
more than a few hours away from here. Unless he stopped off at a Motel.
Possible, but risky? If I work on the assumption that she's only a few
hours away from here then.. I'm nowhere.
What about his stuff? Maybe that'll give me a clue.. but they found
nothing. It wouldn't be too obvious to someone that wasn't looking or it.
Nothing. I've looked through everything and I've found nothing. What do I
do now? I'm back to square one.his file, maybe something will be in there.
Name. Address. Employment history. Previous addresses. Colorado.. New
York.. And a Denver ranch.. wait a sec. Ranch, that's in the middle of
nowhere.um.previously owned by deceased mother. Oh my God, she could be
there. It's perfectly located. Miles out, about an hour from here and he
likely still owns it for semimetal value.
I've found her, in theory. Please let her be there, if she's not, I'll
never find her. Hope, that's all I've got now. Somehow it will just have to
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