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Scarlet.D
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Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Obi-Wan K. & Padmé Amidala - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 09-07-03 - Published: 02-08-03 - Complete - id:1227234
Hi! This is my first fic ever! I hope you enjoy it, it's only starting, and the first couple of chapters will rather be kind of introductions, this one is awfully short but I promise the second will be ready by the end of the weekend. Please review, and don't be so harsh on me. Since English isn't really my natal language I just might have written something wrong, if that happens, could you let me know? Thanks!

*thanks for your reviews, I made some changes as you advised me, I hope its better now. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

They had just gotten into the ship. She was dressed as a handmaiden, standing right next to her decoy, Sabe, who was discussing with Master Jinn the actions that were about to be taken once they landed in Tatooine. To be honest, she wasn't really paying much attention; Her mind was elsewhere in the ship- in the cockpit, where the young Jedi apprentice was giving some instructions to the pilot. Obi-Wan Kenobi was his name, as she recalled. He must have felt her intense gaze on him, because he suddenly glanced back at her, meeting her eyes and giving her a small smile. She blushed and immediately turned her head towards Qui-Gon and Sabe´s conversation, although her mind was still caught on the Jedi's image. He was so handsome, she though.

The voice of Sabe brought her abruptly back from her day dreaming;

"Padme?"

"Yes-your highness?", was the not so quick response.

"Could you accompany me to my quarters?".

"Yes, your highness".

" I will let you know when we are to land, your highness," Master Jinn informed them, bowing goodbye to the pair.

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