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Stelmaria
Author of 8 Stories

Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Reviews: 6 - Published: 05-27-03 - Complete - id:1361843
*Jim Hawkins and all other characters are the property of Disney. (I'm not making any money) All other characters and text are my own :)*

Envy of The Stars

The stars are beautiful tonight
As they always seem to be
I gaze into the endless void
That once was part of me

I stand tall, strong and proud
So they can see I'm ready
To venture out among the clouds
While staying calm and steady

I will be a captain
The finest ever to sail
Across Altaire and Orion
Never shall I fail

Bringing in the Pirates
And other solar scum
I'll be known as Jim "The Hawk"
And earn a goodly sum

Perched atop the Benbow Inn
Pondering starry sky
I realize it's all dream
And heave a mournful sigh

Someday, maybe someday
I'll learn enough to be
A gallant Captain, brave and true
With stars to envy me

-Stelmaria

Any comments you have would be welcome. Feel free to criticize me, as long as it's constructive. I can only improve, right?



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